老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了对老师的喜爱，但句子结构有些不自然，且部分表达重复。建议简化句子，避免冗余，并使用更地道的表达方式。

範例: Yes, my favorite teacher was my high school chemistry teacher. He was very knowledgeable and had a great sense of humor, which made learning enjoyable. He always patiently answered my questions, so I really admired him.

建議: 回答中有些表达不够自然，且句子较长且重复。建议使用更简洁的句子，避免口语化的填充词，并注意语法准确。

範例: No, I am not in contact with my primary school teacher because it's been a long time and we don't share common interests. However, I do follow one of my teachers on WeChat and occasionally comment on her posts.

建議: 回答中时态使用不当，且表达不够清晰。建议使用过去时描述过去的事情，并且句子结构要更流畅自然。

範例: My favorite teacher always answered my questions promptly and taught me unique problem-solving skills. We also kept in touch on WeChat to discuss daily matters.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，注意语法和用词准确，避免重复。

範例: Personally, I don't want to be a teacher because I am introverted and feel shy sharing knowledge with students. However, if necessary, I would be willing to try it.

× When I was in seniors high school, it was my chemistry teacher.

✓ When I was in senior high school, it was my chemistry teacher.

这里的'seniors high school'中'seniors'应为单数形式'senior'，因为'senior high school'是固定搭配，表示高中。

× He is a doctor and he's very humorous to teach professional skills to me and answer my question patiently.

✓ He is a doctor and he's very humorous when teaching professional skills to me and answering my questions patiently.

'humorous'是形容词，不能直接用来修饰动词，需用介词短语或分词结构表达。同时，'answer my question'应为复数形式'questions'，因为通常有多个问题。

× Actually, to be honest, I'm no longer in touch with my primary school teacher because it has been such a long time ago and we don't have the common topic.

✓ Actually, to be honest, I'm no longer in touch with my primary school teacher because it was such a long time ago and we don't have common topics.

'it has been such a long time ago'时态和表达不当，应改为过去时'it was such a long time ago'。'the common topic'中'the'不合适，且'topic'应为复数形式'topics'。

× But sometimes I have 1 teacher's WeChat and I will watch her moments and send some comments.

✓ But sometimes I have one teacher's WeChat and I watch her moments and send some comments.

数字'1'应写为英文单词'one'，更符合口语表达。

× My favorite teacher will closely answer my question in time and teach me some unique skills to solve the problems, and we will keep in touch on WeChat to chat some daily questions.

✓ My favorite teacher will answer my questions promptly and teach me some unique skills to solve problems, and we will keep in touch on WeChat to chat about some daily questions.

'closely answer'搭配不当，应改为'answer promptly'表示及时回答。'chat some daily questions'缺少介词，应为'chat about some daily questions'。

× Well personally I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I'm not a teacher type of person and I'm introverted so I I'm feel shy to share the knowledge to students but if I need to I would like to try this sometimes.

✓ Well, personally I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I'm not the teacher type of person and I'm introverted, so I feel shy to share knowledge with students, but if I need to, I would like to try it sometimes.

'a teacher type of person'应为'the teacher type of person'表示特定类型。'I'm feel'重复，应为'I feel'。'share the knowledge to students'搭配错误，应为'share knowledge with students'。'try this'指代不明，应为'try it'。