老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid mixing genders and incomplete sentences.

範例: Yes, I have a favourite teacher who taught me English. She is very smart and hardworking, and she helped me improve my language skills a lot.

建議: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Use correct expressions like 'in touch with' and avoid repetition. Provide a clear answer and support it with specific details using linking words.

範例: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher. However, I still keep contact with my private teacher because she is very dedicated and supportive.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Provide a complete sentence with a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples or reasons using linking words to explain how your teacher helped you.

範例: When I was living in my country, my favourite teacher always called me to teach me many things, which helped me improve my English skills significantly.

建議: Your answer is understandable but hesitant and repetitive. Give a clear and confident response, then explain your reason with linking words and specific details.

範例: No, I do not want to be a teacher in the future because I believe teaching requires a lot of patience and knowledge, and I prefer to pursue a different career.

× Yes, I have from my favorite teachers one of the most smart guy and she taught me a lot about English.

✓ Yes, I have one of my favorite teachers who is one of the smartest people and she taught me a lot about English.

The phrase 'one of the most smart guy' is incorrect because 'guy' is singular and 'most smart' should be 'smartest' as a superlative adjective. Also, 'one of my favorite teachers' is the correct plural possessive form. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× She's very hard working person and she.

✓ She's a very hardworking person.

The phrase 'hard working' should be combined into the adjective 'hardworking'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to end properly. Adding the article 'a' before 'very hardworking person' is necessary.

× No, I, I, I cannot touch with my primary school teacher, but I, I can't touch with my private teacher.

✓ No, I cannot keep in touch with my primary school teacher, but I can keep in touch with my private teacher.

The verb 'touch' is incorrectly used with the preposition 'with'. The correct phrase is 'keep in touch with'. Also, the original sentence contradicts itself by saying 'cannot touch' and then 'can't touch' but implying contact with the private teacher. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× She's very dedicated person and she always.

✓ She's a very dedicated person and she always helps me.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'always'. Adding a verb like 'helps me' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'very dedicated person'.

× Also while I I was living in my country and she always called me and. Teach to me many things, but when I.

✓ Also, while I was living in my country, she always called me and taught me many things.

The sentence is fragmented and contains repetition ('I I'). The phrase 'Teach to me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'taught me'. The sentence needs to be completed and properly punctuated.

× Ah, no, that is not my dream. So I can't teach somebody, uh, something so, umm, I, I think I'm not as smart as I. Think and I can't teach.

✓ Ah, no, that is not my dream. So I can't teach somebody something. I think I'm not as smart as I think, and I can't teach.

The sentence has unnecessary pauses and repetition. The modal verb 'can't' is used correctly but the sentence structure is awkward. Removing filler words and correcting punctuation improves clarity.