老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为简单，句子结构单一，缺少连贯的连接词和具体细节。建议丰富答案内容，使用连接词使表达更自然流畅，并提供更多具体细节。

範例: Yes, I have a favourite teacher who teaches English. Her classes are very interesting because she uses many interactive activities. For example, she often organizes group discussions, which help me learn more effectively.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，语法和句子结构有误。建议完整表达想法，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明与老师联系的方式。

範例: No, I am not in regular contact with my primary school teacher, but we are connected on WeChat. Sometimes, I like her posts and send her messages to keep in touch.

建議: 回答内容较少，句子不完整，缺少细节和连贯性。建议补充具体例子，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: My favourite teacher helped me by encouraging me not to worry about others' opinions. For instance, she told me to be brave and follow my own path, which boosted my confidence.

建議: 回答表达不够连贯，句子断断续续，缺少连接词和完整结构。建议使用完整句子，合理使用连接词，并具体说明原因。

範例: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because sometimes I struggle to take care of myself. Therefore, managing a whole classroom would be too stressful for me.

× Her class is really interesting for me.

✓ Her class is really interesting to me.

介词使用错误。英语中表达“对我来说有趣”应使用介词'to'，而不是'for'。建议记住固定搭配'interesting to someone'。

× No. But we have WeChat. So sometimes I will give her. Moments a.

✓ No. But we have WeChat, so sometimes I will send her Moments.

句子结构错误。原句断句不当，导致意思不清晰。'give her Moments a'语序错误，应调整为'send her Moments'，且连接词使用逗号连接两个相关句子。建议注意句子连贯和正确的词序。

× She once told me, don't care about other people's opinions and to be brave enough to do what you.

✓ She once told me, 'Don't care about other people's opinions and be brave enough to do what you want.'

句子结构错误。直接引语缺少完整内容，且动词形式不一致。应保持并列结构一致，且补全句子。建议注意引语完整性和并列动词形式一致。

× No, sometimes I even can't take care of myself. Let alone a room full of. Students, I'm afraid of. I will lose my mind.

✓ No, sometimes I can't even take care of myself, let alone a room full of students. I'm afraid I will lose my mind.

句子结构错误。原句断句不当，导致语义不连贯。'let alone a room full of students'应作为一个完整短语，且'I'm afraid of'后缺少宾语。建议注意句子连贯和完整表达。