老师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议回答时先明确表达喜欢哪位老师，并简洁说明原因，避免语法错误。

範例: Yes, my favourite teacher was my math teacher in senior high school because she was very patient and helped me improve my skills.

建議: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议直接回答是否保持联系，并简洁说明原因，使用连贯的句子。

範例: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teachers because I moved far away after graduation.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺乏具体细节。建议明确说明老师如何帮助自己，并提供具体例子。

範例: My favourite teacher helped me by giving extra lessons and encouraging me to work harder, which improved my math scores.

建議: 表达了观点但语法和用词不准确，且句子不够流畅。建议用更自然的表达方式说明原因，并避免重复。

範例: No, I don't want to be a teacher because I find it difficult to communicate with children and I don't think teaching suits me.

× Mass teacher when I was in my Senior High School and the given so at that time I always got a good mask or in school, but she always found that I was not dissolve and.

✓ My math teacher when I was in Senior High School was very kind, and at that time I always got good marks in school, but she always found that I was not diligent enough.

原句中“Mass teacher”应为“math teacher”，且“mask or”应为“marks”，属于单复数及词汇错误。需要将“mask or”改为“marks”，表示成绩。

× Mass teacher when I was in my Senior High School and the given so at that time I always got a good mask or in school, but she always found that I was not dissolve and.

✓ My math teacher when I was in Senior High School was very kind, and at that time I always got good marks in school, but she always found that I was not diligent enough.

原句中“dissolve and”用词错误，应为“diligent”，即勤奋。这里是代词和词汇使用错误。

× No, I'm, uh, when I graduated from primary school, I'm not attached the, the teachers in there anymore because my primary school is really far from my home and the teachers, you're late leaving the school residential area. So we, we have.

✓ No, when I graduated from primary school, I was not in touch with the teachers there anymore because my primary school was really far from my home and the teachers had already left the school residential area. So we lost contact.

原句中“I'm not attached the, the teachers”中“attached”用法错误，应为“in touch with”，属于介词使用错误。

× No, I'm, uh, when I graduated from primary school, I'm not attached the, the teachers in there anymore because my primary school is really far from my home and the teachers, you're late leaving the school residential area. So we, we have.

✓ No, when I graduated from primary school, I was not in touch with the teachers there anymore because my primary school was really far from my home and the teachers had already left the school residential area. So we lost contact.

原句中时态混乱，描述过去事件应使用过去时，如“was not in touch”，“was really far”，“had already left”，属于过去时使用错误。

× To me, because she had the most talent, so even though I got a good score in mass, but she she still so that was not enough so she.

✓ To me, because she was very talented, even though I got good scores in math, she still thought that was not enough, so she encouraged me to work harder.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语和完整句子，导致表达不清晰，属于句子结构错误。需要补充完整句子使其通顺。

× To me, because she had the most talent, so even though I got a good score in mass, but she she still so that was not enough so she.

✓ To me, because she was very talented, even though I got good scores in math, she still thought that was not enough, so she encouraged me to work harder.

“score in mass”应为“scores in math”，分数通常用复数形式，且“mass”应为“math”，属于单复数及词汇错误。

× No, I definitely don't want to be a teacher in the future because I, I'm not going to get along with children and, and especially some, some keys. I think it's very annoyed when I talk with them. So I think that, uh, the teacher clear is not suited.

✓ No, I definitely don't want to be a teacher in the future because I don't get along with children, especially some kids. I think it's very annoying when I talk with them. So I think that teaching is not suitable for me.

原句中“the teacher clear is not suited”用法错误，应为“teaching is not suitable for me”，属于情态动词及表达错误。

× No, I definitely don't want to be a teacher in the future because I, I'm not going to get along with children and, and especially some, some keys. I think it's very annoyed when I talk with them. So I think that, uh, the teacher clear is not suited.

✓ No, I definitely don't want to be a teacher in the future because I don't get along with children, especially some kids. I think it's very annoying when I talk with them. So I think that teaching is not suitable for me.

原句中“some keys”应为“some kids”，“it's very annoyed”应为“it's very annoying”，属于代词和形容词使用错误。