网络— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要直接并且语法正确。首先用一个清晰的主题句说明开始使用网络的时间或年龄，然后用一两句具体细节支持。注意时态、冠词和动词形式（例如：I started using the Internet when I was a student）。尽量不重复信息，控制在最多5句。

範例: I started using the internet when I was a primary school student. At first I used it mainly for games and watching videos. Over time I began to use it for learning and finding information as well.

建議: 要直接回答频率并用连接词给出原因或举例。注意单复数和动词形式（every day, I scroll）。合并短句，使用一个主题句再加1–2个具体例子。避免片段式表达。

範例: I go online every day, usually several hours a day. I often watch short videos on apps like TikTok and YouTube, especially makeup tutorials because I enjoy learning new techniques.

建議: 回答应更清晰地描述具体时间和原因，并用连词组织句子。改正人称、时态和否定结构（e.g. my mum didn’t allow me to use the internet when I was in junior high）。说明结果或感受会更完整。控制在3–4句内。

範例: Yes. When I was in junior high school my mum didn’t allow me to use the internet for a while because she thought I was spending too much time online and not studying. As a result I had to focus on homework and read books instead.

建議: 直接回答并给出具体原因和改进措施。注意语法（I spend too much time on the internet; I don’t learn useful things）并使用连接词表达对比或结果。建议给出一两项你打算采取的改变。

範例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online, mainly watching short videos which are not very educational. To improve this I plan to limit screen time to two hours a day and use some of that time to study or read online courses.

建議: 回答要明确说明你会做什么并解释原因，避免不必要的复杂词汇和语法错误。比如说‘I would do handicrafts’并说明具体活动和感受。使用连接词如 ‘for example’ 或 ‘because’。

範例: Without the internet I would do handicrafts, such as sewing or making small paper models. I find these activities relaxing and they help me concentrate, so I would enjoy spending my free time on them.

× I start to using the Internet that I was agreed to student.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was a student.

原句时态和结构错误。此处要表达“我在学生时代开始使用互联网”，应使用过去式started和动词短语started using；不要说“to using”，应为“using”；“that I was agreed to student”语序和用词错误，改为“when I was a student”。建议：用started + 动名词或短语（started using）。

× I really enjoy to scrolling through the Internet video.

✓ I really enjoy scrolling through videos on the Internet.

动词enjoy后应接动名词（-ing），不能加不定式to；video应为复数videos且短语更自然为«videos on the Internet»。建议：enjoy + -ing；注意名词单复数及介词搭配。

× Mostly I go online everyday because I really like to scrolling through the video.

✓ Mostly I go online every day because I really like scrolling through videos.

every day写作两词；like后接动名词scrolling而不是不定式to scrolling；video建议用复数videos。建议：注意副词短语拼写、like + -ing、名词单复数。

× Short video like TikTok and YouTube.

✓ I watch short videos on apps like TikTok and YouTube.

原句缺少谓语和完整句子结构，且短语搭配不完整。应补上主语和动词并使用复数short videos与介词on/apps搭配。建议：构成完整句子（主语+谓语+宾语）。

× I prefer to look the makeup tutorial because I love it.

✓ I prefer watching makeup tutorials because I love them.

prefer后通常接动名词（watching）或结构prefer to do，但与look搭配不当；makeup tutorial应为复数tutorials；代词指代改为them匹配复数。建议：prefer + -ing，注意代词与先行词数一致。

× Yeah, I have. That is I'm a junior high school student.

✓ Yes, I have. That was when I was a junior high school student.

原句时态和连接方式不对。回答“Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?”需说过去发生的事，应使用past tense: that was when I was...。建议：使用was和when引导时间状语从句。

× I my mum don't like me to use the Internet because I mostly everyday to use the Internet.

✓ My mum didn't like me using the Internet because I used it almost every day.

原句主语和人称代词顺序混乱；时间和时态需用过去时（wasn't allowed），所以这里用didn't like和used；不要说“to use the Internet”或“mostly everyday to use”，改为almost every day / nearly every day。建议：注意代词顺序、动词时态一致、频率副词位置。

× I don't study in.

✓ I didn't study then.

原句缺少完整动词结构和宾语，“in”用法不当。应说“I didn't study then”表示那时候我不学习。建议：确保句子包含主语+谓语，使用适当时间副词（then）。

× Yes, I think I'm a most everyday to use Internet and I think I spend too much time in the Internet.

✓ Yes, I think I use the Internet most days, and I think I spend too much time on the Internet.

原句语序和时态混乱。“I'm a most everyday to use Internet”不合语法，改为I use the Internet most days；介词应为on the Internet；去掉多余的I think重复可保留一次。建议：用习惯性现在时表达频率（use ... most days），注意介词on。

× I don't to learn the useful knowledge so I don't. So that's all.

✓ I don't learn useful things online, so I don't learn useful knowledge there. That's all.

原句动词不定式使用错误（don't to learn），逻辑不清。应使用I don't learn或I don't gain useful knowledge online来表达。建议：使用正确的谓语结构并保持逻辑连贯。

× What would you do without the internet?

✓ (Question is fine; student answer corrected below)

考官提问无语法错误，保持不变。

× I prefer to do a handcraft to with within some characters.

✓ I prefer doing handicrafts with some characters.

prefer后接动名词doing更自然；handcraft更常用复数handicrafts；短语“to with within”不合，改为with；characters若指人物形象可用with certain characters。建议：prefer + -ing，简化介词搭配。

× I think it is interesting and I enjoy the time for to scan to make scanned lines.

✓ I think it's interesting and I enjoy spending time making patterns (or scan lines).

原句结构混乱：不定式to scan/to make scanned lines用法错误，time后接动名词spending time doing sth；建议明确说法为making patterns或making scanned lines。建议：用spending time + -ing表达享受某种活动，保持措辞清晰。