网络— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question by stating when you started using the internet, then add supporting details with clear linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

範例: I started using the internet about ten years ago. Since then, I often use it during my free time to check social media. Additionally, I rely on the internet at work to search for information related to my tasks.

建議: Your answer is somewhat vague and has grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence answering the question, then use linking words to add specific details about your online habits throughout the day.

範例: I go online several times a day, depending on my schedule. For example, if I wake up early, I check the internet in the morning. Otherwise, I catch up during lunch or after work. During work hours, I usually use the internet for personal tasks.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Directly answer the question by recalling a specific time or explaining the situation clearly. Use proper grammar and linking words to make your response coherent.

範例: I can't remember a specific time when I was not allowed to use the internet. However, when I was in high school, we didn't have high-speed internet on our phones, so I didn't use it much during that time.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Improve sentence structure and use linking words to explain why you spend a lot of time online, providing specific reasons.

範例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because nowadays, many tasks require internet access. For instance, at work, I need to answer emails and messages throughout the day, which keeps me connected constantly.

建議: Your answer is somewhat relevant but lacks clarity and proper grammar. Directly answer the question and use linking words to explain activities you enjoy without the internet, providing specific examples.

範例: Without the internet, I would spend more time doing activities like cooking, planting flowers, and meditating. These hobbies help me feel calm and relaxed away from screens.

× Eyes often to sing the Internet when I have a free time to check my social media platform and during my work I always use the Internet for search the information that relate to my work.

✓ I often use the Internet when I have free time to check my social media platforms, and during my work, I always use the Internet to search for information that relates to my work.

The original sentence contains incorrect verb forms such as 'Eyes often to sing' which is nonsensical and likely a mishearing or typo. The verb 'use' should be in the base form to indicate habitual action. Also, 'for search' should be 'to search' as the infinitive form is required after 'use the Internet'. 'Relate' should be 'relates' to agree with the singular noun 'information'. The sentence is corrected to use proper verb forms and subject-verb agreement.

× Eyes often to sing the Internet when I have a free time to check my social media platform and during my work I always use the Internet for search the information that relate to my work.

✓ I often use the Internet when I have free time to check my social media platforms, and during my work, I always use the Internet to search for information that relates to my work.

The phrase 'a free time' is incorrect because 'time' in this context is uncountable and should not have the article 'a'. Also, 'social media platform' should be plural 'platforms' to indicate multiple platforms. Correct quantifiers improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Is depends on the day. If I get up early I always check it in the morning but if I don't have time I just take everything at lunch or after work. But during work I usually use this for just me.

✓ It depends on the day. If I get up early, I always check it in the morning, but if I don't have time, I just check everything at lunch or after work. But during work, I usually use it just for myself.

The original sentence starts with 'Is depends' which is incorrect; the subject 'It' is missing. 'Take everything' is unclear and should be 'check everything' to match the context. 'Use this for just me' is awkward; 'use it just for myself' is clearer and grammatically correct. Modal verbs are not directly involved here, but the sentence structure and pronoun use are corrected for clarity.

× Is depends on the day. If I get up early I always check it in the morning but if I don't have time I just take everything at lunch or after work. But during work I usually use this for just me.

✓ It depends on the day. If I get up early, I always check it in the morning, but if I don't have time, I just check everything at lunch or after work. But during work, I usually use it just for myself.

The pronouns 'it' and 'this' are used inconsistently. 'This' should be replaced with 'it' to refer back to the Internet or online activity. Also, 'just me' should be 'just myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun. Proper pronoun use ensures clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I didn't usually have an experience for someone not allow me to use the Internet because when I at high school we don't have like in the high speed Internet on the phone and this myself doesn't allow me to use the Internet too much this day.

✓ I didn't usually have an experience of someone not allowing me to use the Internet because when I was in high school, we didn't have high-speed Internet on phones, and I myself didn't use the Internet too much at that time.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'didn't usually have' is acceptable but 'someone not allow me' should be 'someone not allowing me' to use the gerund after 'experience of'. 'When I at high school' should be 'when I was in high school' to use past tense. 'We don't have' should be 'we didn't have' to maintain past tense consistency. 'This myself doesn't allow me' is incorrect; it should be 'I myself didn't use'. The phrase 'this day' is better expressed as 'at that time' to refer to the past. Correcting these tense errors improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I didn't usually have an experience for someone not allow me to use the Internet because when I at high school we don't have like in the high speed Internet on the phone and this myself doesn't allow me to use the Internet too much this day.

✓ I didn't usually have an experience of someone not allowing me to use the Internet because when I was in high school, we didn't have high-speed Internet on phones, and I myself didn't use the Internet too much at that time.

The preposition 'for' after 'experience' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of'. Also, 'in the high speed Internet' is awkward; 'high-speed Internet' without 'in the' is correct. Proper preposition use is essential for natural and correct English.

× Yes I do but have no choice because right now we have to go online. Especially when you are working you have to ready to answer the questions, answer the mail throughout and line and mail.

✓ Yes, I do, but I have no choice because right now we have to go online. Especially when you are working, you have to be ready to answer questions and emails throughout the day.

The sentence lacks the verb 'be' in 'have to ready'; it should be 'have to be ready'. 'Answer the mail throughout and line and mail' is unclear and likely a misstatement; 'answer questions and emails throughout the day' is clearer. Present tense verbs are corrected for proper form and clarity.

× Yes I do but have no choice because right now we have to go online. Especially when you are working you have to ready to answer the questions, answer the mail throughout and line and mail.

✓ Yes, I do, but I have no choice because right now we have to go online. Especially when you are working, you have to be ready to answer questions and emails throughout the day.

The phrase 'answer the mail throughout and line and mail' is confusing and likely a misuse of prepositions and conjunctions. 'Throughout the day' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate continuous action during the day. Correct preposition use is necessary for clear communication.

× When I do cooking, plant the flour, doing meditations, I do not have to get into the Internet, so it's make me very calm and feel relaxed.

✓ When I cook, plant flowers, and meditate, I do not have to go on the Internet, so it makes me very calm and feel relaxed.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'do cooking' instead of 'cook', 'plant the flour' which should be 'plant flowers', and 'doing meditations' instead of 'meditate'. Also, 'get into the Internet' is incorrect; 'go on the Internet' is appropriate. 'It's make me' should be 'it makes me' to agree in number and tense. Correct verb forms and idiomatic expressions improve the sentence's clarity and grammatical correctness.