网络— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误，如“started to using”应为“started using”，并且句子结构不够简洁。建议直接回答问题并用简单句表达时间点和用途，避免冗长。

範例: I started using the Internet when I was in middle school. I mainly used it to learn new lessons and complete my homework after class.

建議: 回答较为完整，但连接词使用不足，建议使用连接词如“and”或“also”使句子更连贯，同时避免重复使用“or”。

範例: I usually go online for about three hours a day. In my spare time, I use the Internet to go shopping, finish my homework, and chat with my best friends.

建議: 语法错误较多，如“not allowed”应为“am not allowed”，句子结构不完整。建议简洁明了地表达禁止使用互联网的时间和原因。

範例: Yes, I am not allowed to use the Internet during exams because it would be unfair if someone searched for answers online.

建議: 句子过长且结构混乱，存在语法错误。建议分句表达观点，使用连接词，并避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online. In my spare time, I often watch videos and play games, which might be excessive.

建議: 回答较好，但可以更自然流畅。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: If I didn't have the Internet, I would probably read books and catch up on the news through newspapers.

× I started to using the Internet since I was a middle school student and I use the Internet to learn more lessons and do my homework after the classes.

✓ I started using the Internet since I was a middle school student and I use the Internet to learn more lessons and do my homework after the classes.

动词start后面应直接接动名词形式using，而不是to using。动词start后接动名词表示开始做某事。

× I started to using the Internet since I was a middle school student and I use the Internet to learn more lessons and do my homework after the classes.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was a middle school student and I use the Internet to learn more lessons and do my homework after the classes.

表示过去某时开始的动作，应该用when而不是since，因为since后面应接具体时间点。

× Absolutely, when I attend every examination I not allowed to use the Internet because if someone use Internet to search some answers is not fair to other people.

✓ Absolutely, when I attend every examination I am not allowed to use the Internet because if someone uses the Internet to search some answers it is not fair to other people.

情态动词后面缺少be动词am，且主语是第三人称单数someone，动词use应加s变为uses。

× Absolutely, when I attend every examination I not allowed to use the Internet because if someone use Internet to search some answers is not fair to other people.

✓ Absolutely, when I attend every examination I am not allowed to use the Internet because if someone uses the Internet to search some answers it is not fair to other people.

主语someone是第三人称单数，谓语动词use应加s变为uses。

× Absolutely, when I attend every examination I not allowed to use the Internet because if someone use Internet to search some answers is not fair to other people.

✓ Absolutely, when I attend every examination I am not allowed to use the Internet because if someone uses the Internet to search some answers it is not fair to other people.

Internet前应加定冠词the，表示特指网络。

× Yes, of course, as a student in my spare time I always use the Internet to watch some videos and play games and I think it's maybe too much time on it and spend a lot of time to playing them.

✓ Yes, of course, as a student in my spare time I always use the Internet to watch some videos and play games and I think it's maybe too much time on it and spend a lot of time playing them.

动词spend后面应接动名词playing，而不是to playing。

× Yes, of course, as a student in my spare time I always use the Internet to watch some videos and play games and I think it's maybe too much time on it and spend a lot of time to playing them.

✓ Yes, of course, as a student in my spare time I always use the Internet to watch some videos and play games and I think I maybe spend too much time on it and spend a lot of time playing them.

表达“花费时间”应使用动词spend加宾语和动名词形式，且句子结构需调整使表达更自然。

× As for me, maybe I will choose to find a book and read some stories and learn more about the news from the newspaper.

✓ As for me, maybe I will choose to find a book to read some stories and learn more about the news from the newspaper.

动词choose后面接不定式to read更符合英语习惯，表示选择做某事。