网络— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然。建议使用更准确的时间表达方式，并且避免冗余。比如说："I started using the internet when I was about 7 or 8 years old. I mainly used it to share collections with my friends."

範例: I started using the internet when I was about 7 or 8 years old. At that time, I mainly used it to share collections with my friends.

建議: 回答中表达不够自然，"unknown resources"用词不当。建议使用更贴切的词汇，如"various resources"，并且句子结构更流畅。

範例: I usually go online almost every day because various resources are very important for my research.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词过多。建议简洁表达，注意时态和动词形式。

範例: Yes, I remember when I was a child, my parents told me to do my homework, but I wanted to chat with my friends online, so they stopped me.

建議: 回答不连贯，语法和词汇错误较多。建议简化句子，使用正确的词汇和语法，避免口语填充词。

範例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because social media is very attractive and easy to use on our phones.

建議: 回答不完整且有语法错误。建议完整表达想法，注意句子结构和词汇选择。

範例: If there were no internet, I would prefer going outside to enjoy the beautiful scenery and meet people to chat with them in person. Sometimes, I would also spend quality time with my family.

× When I was young, maybe at my 7 or 8 years old, I started to use Internet just for establishing collections with my friends.

✓ When I was young, maybe at my 7 or 8 years old, I started to use the Internet just for establishing collections with my friends.

The word 'Internet' is a singular noun that requires the definite article 'the' before it. Without 'the', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Always use 'the Internet' when referring to the global network.

× When I was young, maybe at my 7 or 8 years old, I started to use Internet just for establishing collections with my friends.

✓ When I was young, maybe at 7 or 8 years old, I started to use the Internet just for establishing collections with my friends.

The phrase 'at my 7 or 8 years old' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'at' followed by the age without 'my'. So, it should be 'at 7 or 8 years old'. The possessive 'my' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Well, today I usually go online almost every day because unknown resources are quite important for me to do some research.

✓ Well, today I usually go online almost every day because unknown resources are quite important for me to do some research.

No correction needed here as the prepositions are used correctly.

× Yes, definitely. I still remember when I was a kid my parents required me to do my homework, but at that moment I just want to uh, chat with my friends online so my parents stopped me do that.

✓ Yes, definitely. I still remember when I was a kid my parents required me to do my homework, but at that moment I just wanted to, uh, chat with my friends online so my parents stopped me from doing that.

The verb 'want' should be in the past tense 'wanted' to match the past context. Also, 'stopped me do that' is incorrect; the correct form is 'stopped me from doing that' because 'stop' is followed by 'from' plus gerund.

× Yes, definitely. I still remember when I was a kid my parents required me to do my homework, but at that moment I just want to uh, chat with my friends online so my parents stopped me do that.

✓ Yes, definitely. I still remember when I was a kid my parents required me to do my homework, but at that moment I just wanted to, uh, chat with my friends online so my parents stopped me from doing that.

The phrase 'stopped me do that' is incorrect modal verb usage. The verb 'stop' should be followed by 'from' plus the gerund form of the verb, so 'stopped me from doing that' is correct.

× Yeah, definitely as the tech league and science umm developing, you know umm we are easy to exercise the routes social media platforms, so it quite easy to spend a lot of time just to playing with our phone.

✓ Yeah, definitely as technology and science are developing, you know, we are easy to access various social media platforms, so it's quite easy to spend a lot of time just playing with our phones.

Several preposition and word choice errors: 'tech league' should be 'technology', 'easy to exercise the routes social media platforms' is incorrect; it should be 'easy to access various social media platforms'. Also, 'just to playing' should be 'just playing'. 'Our phone' should be plural 'our phones' to match plural usage.

× Yeah, definitely as the tech league and science umm developing, you know umm we are easy to exercise the routes social media platforms, so it quite easy to spend a lot of time just to playing with our phone.

✓ Yeah, definitely as technology and science are developing, you know, we are easy to access various social media platforms, so it's quite easy to spend a lot of time just playing with our phones.

The noun 'phone' should be plural 'phones' because 'our' implies more than one person, each with their own phone. Also, 'routes social media platforms' is incorrect; 'various social media platforms' is appropriate.

× Well, if without Internet, I prefer going outside to explore the lecture views and to meet people in person and chat with them.

✓ Well, if there were no Internet, I would prefer going outside to explore the local views and to meet people in person and chat with them.

The phrase 'if without Internet' is incorrect; it should be 'if there were no Internet' to express a hypothetical situation. Also, 'lecture views' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'local views' makes more sense in context.

× And sometimes I like to spend high quality time with my.

✓ And sometimes I like to spend high-quality time with my family.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'my'. Adding 'family' completes the sentence meaningfully. Also, 'high quality' should be hyphenated as 'high-quality' when used as an adjective before a noun.