网络— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use a clear and complete sentence structure. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'yeah' and be more specific about the time you started using the internet. For example, say "I started using the internet when I was in grade 2, mainly to watch YouTube videos."

範例: I started using the internet when I was in grade 2, mainly to watch YouTube videos.

建議: Answer the question directly by stating how often you go online. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid confusing sentences. For example, "I go online every day to watch YouTube and play video games. I also use the internet for learning and studying."

範例: I go online every day to watch YouTube and play video games. I also use the internet for learning and studying.

建議: Provide a clear and concise answer with specific reasons. Avoid repeating words and unclear explanations. For example, "I wasn't allowed to use the internet while eating or going to the toilet because my parents said it might cause stomach problems."

範例: I wasn't allowed to use the internet while eating or going to the toilet because my parents said it might cause stomach problems.

建議: Answer directly and use correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, I think I spend too much time online, especially on Facebook and TikTok. I watch TikTok videos every day and feel addicted to it."

範例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online, especially on Facebook and TikTok. I watch TikTok videos every day and feel addicted to it.

建議: Give a clear and structured answer with correct grammar. Avoid repetition and explain your feelings clearly. For example, "I think I cannot do much without the internet because I rely on it for many things. If I don't use it, I feel lost and want to go back online."

範例: I think I cannot do much without the internet because I rely on it for many things. If I don't use it, I feel lost and want to go back online.

× I started use the Internet when I was grade 2 be uh, like YouTube.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was in grade 2, like YouTube.

The verb 'start' should be followed by the '-ing' form of the verb, so 'use' should be 'using'. Also, 'in grade 2' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate the time in school.

× I started use the Internet when I was grade 2 be uh, like YouTube.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was in grade 2, like YouTube.

The preposition 'in' is needed before 'grade 2' to indicate the time period in school.

× I started using Internet when I was created to mainly to watch YouTube and umm play video games.

✓ I started using the Internet mainly to watch YouTube and play video games.

The phrase 'was created to' is incorrect here; it should be removed. Also, 'Internet' needs the article 'the'. The verb 'started' should be followed by the '-ing' form 'using'.

× I started using Internet when I was created to mainly to watch YouTube and umm play video games.

✓ I started using the Internet mainly to watch YouTube and play video games.

The noun 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× And yes every member the feeling that I was excited to use that for learning or studying.

✓ And yes, I remember the feeling that I was excited to use it for learning or studying.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Every member' is incorrect; it should be 'I remember'. Also, 'that' should be 'it' referring to the Internet.

× I wasn't allowed myself to use the Internet when I was going to the toilet or when I was eating because the because when we when we are eating but we are watching something, it's gonna make our stomach, umm, pressure or maybe something hurt.

✓ I wasn't allowed to use the Internet when I was going to the toilet or when I was eating because when we eat and watch something, it can cause stomach pressure or maybe hurt.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used after 'allowed'. The correct structure is 'wasn't allowed to use'. Also, the sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammar.

× I wasn't allowed myself to use the Internet when I was going to the toilet or when I was eating because the because when we when we are eating but we are watching something, it's gonna make our stomach, umm, pressure or maybe something hurt.

✓ I wasn't allowed to use the Internet when I was going to the toilet or when I was eating because when we eat and watch something, it can cause stomach pressure or maybe hurt.

The modal verb 'wasn't allowed to' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'myself'. Also, 'gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'can' for proper modal verb usage.

× Of course, I think I'm spending too much time on life for Facebook, social media, that's it.

✓ Of course, I think I'm spending too much time on Facebook and social media, that's it.

The phrase 'on life for Facebook' is incorrect; it should be 'on Facebook and social media'. The present continuous tense 'I'm spending' is correct here.

× Of course, I think I'm spending too much time on life for Facebook, social media, that's it.

✓ Of course, I think I'm spending too much time on Facebook and social media, that's it.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'Facebook and social media', but 'life for' is incorrect and should be removed.

× And to watch Tik Toks, yes, I watch it every day.

✓ And to watch TikToks, yes, I watch them every day.

The plural noun 'TikToks' requires the plural pronoun 'them' instead of 'it'. The present simple tense 'I watch' is appropriate here.

× And to watch Tik Toks, yes, I watch it every day.

✓ And to watch TikToks, yes, I watch them every day.

'TikToks' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' instead of 'it'.

× I think I addicted to Tiktok because I really need Tiktok for every moment.

✓ I think I am addicted to TikTok because I really need TikTok every moment.

The verb 'am' is missing before 'addicted'. Also, 'for every moment' is better expressed as 'every moment'.

× I think I cannot do anything without Internet.

✓ I think I cannot do anything without the Internet.

The noun 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. The present tense 'cannot do' is correct.

× I never I never tried this before when when I do something without the Internet I feel I just lost something and I need to use the Internet again.

✓ I have never tried this before. When I do something without the Internet, I feel like I have just lost something and need to use the Internet again.

The present perfect tense 'have never tried' is appropriate for experiences up to now. Also, 'feel like' is the correct expression. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I never I never tried this before when when I do something without the Internet I feel I just lost something and I need to use the Internet again.

✓ I have never tried this before. When I do something without the Internet, I feel like I have just lost something and need to use the Internet again.

The present tense 'do' is correct for habitual actions. 'Feel like' is the correct phrase to express sensation or opinion.

× I don't know why I think I addicted to the in.

✓ I don't know why, but I think I am addicted to the Internet.

The verb 'am' is missing before 'addicted'. The sentence is completed with 'the Internet' for clarity.