网络— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is informative but a bit redundant and slightly unnatural. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating phrases like 'I used to'. Also, start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details with linking words for coherence.

範例: I started using the internet around 2009 when I was in 8th grade. At that time, I had a Nokia mobile phone which allowed me to surf the internet occasionally.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by reducing hesitation and adding linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and provide a bit more detail to enrich your response.

範例: I go online every day since my work requires it. Besides work, I also use the internet to check social media platforms like Facebook and Instagram.

建議: Good answer with clear structure and relevant details. To improve, try to use linking words like 'however' to make the contrast clearer and vary your vocabulary a bit more.

範例: Yes, during my college classes, we were not allowed to use the internet or smartphones. However, between classes, we could go to the computer lab to access the internet.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural by avoiding phrases like 'the course of time' and using more common expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, definitely. Whenever I have free time, I spend it on social media apps like Facebook and Instagram. Once I start, I often lose track of time.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to start directly, avoid filler words, and use clearer sentence structures with linking words.

範例: In my opinion, life would be very difficult without the internet nowadays because everything from work and study to entertainment depends on a reliable connection.

× I am a very old user of Internet.

✓ I am a very old user of the Internet.

The word 'Internet' is a unique entity and requires the definite article 'the' before it. Omitting 'the' before 'Internet' is incorrect in English.

× I used to surf Internet on my phone.

✓ I used to surf the Internet on my phone.

When referring to the Internet, the definite article 'the' is necessary. Saying 'surf Internet' without 'the' is grammatically incorrect.

× I started using Internet around that period.

✓ I started using the Internet around that period.

The noun 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the' when used in this context. Omitting 'the' is a common error.

× I go online every day because of my work related to, uh, Internet.

✓ I go online every day because of my work related to, uh, the Internet.

The phrase 'related to the Internet' requires the definite article 'the' before 'Internet' to be grammatically correct.

× we were not allowed to use the Internet or our smartphone in the class.

✓ we were not allowed to use the Internet or our smartphones in class.

'Smartphone' should be plural 'smartphones' to match 'our' (plural possessive pronoun). Also, 'in class' is the correct phrase without 'the' when referring to being in class generally.

× or our smartphone in the class.

✓ or our smartphones in class.

'Our' is a plural possessive pronoun and should be followed by a plural noun 'smartphones' to maintain agreement.

× we were allowed to go to the computer lab and use the Internet there.

✓ we were allowed to go to the computer lab and use the Internet there.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I spend it on social media applications like Facebook and Instagram.

✓ I spend it on social media applications like Facebook and Instagram.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× life would be very hard without the Internet nowadays because everything from work to study to entertainment depends upon a good Internet.

✓ life would be very hard without the Internet nowadays because everything from work to study to entertainment depends upon a good Internet connection.

The phrase 'a good Internet' is incomplete; it should be 'a good Internet connection' to be grammatically correct and clear.