网络— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
When did you start using the internet?
考生
When I was little in our primary school where our teacher explained how to use the keyboard for typing and how to use software to play the game, I was very intrigued when I was little.
考官
How often do you go online?
考生
I use the Internet almost every single day. For example, when I'm dealing with working tasks or when I need to search for information. I need to use the computer or my smartphone to search for information.
考官
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
考生
Yes. When I was little I was obsessed with a game called the Dota. I tended to be addicted to it, so my parents didn't allow me to use computer.
考官
Do you think you spend too much time online?
考生
Yes, I spent a lot of time online. In fact, every part of my life involves the Internet. Every day when I wake up, the first thing I do is to search my phone and watch some meaningless short videos.
考官
What would you do without the internet?
考生
Wow, it's really hard to say what I would do without using Internet because nowadays every part of my life involves using the Internet. If I stop using the Internet I might just catch up some sleep. Otherwise I use Internet a lot.
評估
總分
Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中有重复表达“when I was little”，且句子结构较为复杂，建议简化句子，避免重复，并且更自然地表达时间和经历。
範例: I started using the internet when I was in primary school. Our teacher taught us how to use the keyboard and some software to play games, which really intrigued me.
How often do you go online?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答较为清晰，但有些重复“search for information”，建议合并相关内容，使用连接词使回答更连贯。
範例: I use the internet almost every day, mainly for work tasks and searching for information on my computer or smartphone.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答内容明确，但句子结构简单，且“the Dota”用法不准确，建议改为“a game called Dota”，并丰富细节。
範例: Yes, when I was young, I was obsessed with a game called Dota. Because I was addicted, my parents didn't allow me to use the computer for a while.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
分數: 70.0建議: 时态使用不准确，“spent”应为“spend”，另外“search my phone”表达不自然，建议改为“check my phone”。
範例: Yes, I spend a lot of time online. In fact, the internet is part of every aspect of my life. Every morning, the first thing I do is check my phone and watch some short videos.
What would you do without the internet?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答重复且不够具体，建议简化表达并提供更多具体活动作为替代。
範例: It's hard to imagine life without the internet because I use it so much. If I couldn't use it, I might spend more time sleeping or reading books.
文法
× my parents didn't allow me to use computer.
✓ my parents didn't allow me to use the computer.
这里缺少了定冠词“the”，因为“computer”是特指的，表示特定的电脑。英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。
× Yes, I spent a lot of time online.
✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time online.
回答当前是否花很多时间上网，应该用一般现在时“spend”，而不是过去时“spent”。
× If I stop using the Internet I might just catch up some sleep.
✓ If I stop using the Internet, I might just catch up on some sleep.
短语“catch up on sleep”中需要介词“on”，表示补觉。缺少介词导致表达不完整。
× Otherwise I use Internet a lot.
✓ Otherwise, I use the Internet a lot.
“Internet”前需要加定冠词“the”，因为“the Internet”是固定搭配，表示特定的互联网。
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