新闻— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and directly answer, then give one clear reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition and unfinished sentences. Use more natural phrasing and correct grammar (e.g., “my country” not “my own countries”).

範例: Yes, I am. I think adults should keep up with current events, because it helps them make informed decisions about work, finances and society. For example, I read headlines each morning to follow economic and political developments.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence describing your usual method, then give two specific sources and a linking phrase to explain why. Correct word choice: say “from various sources” and “online articles” rather than vague phrases.

範例: I usually check news from various sources. For instance, I read online news sites and a national newspaper, and I compare reports from both to get a balanced view.

建議: Give a direct answer followed by a concise reason. Avoid repeating ideas and fix grammar (“information” is uncountable). Add one linking word such as “because” to connect reason to answer.

範例: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist, because I prefer my current job. However, I do follow multiple sources to stay informed and ensure the information is reliable.

建議: Answer briefly and then give a specific detail about what you read this morning. Replace vague phrases like “some kind of article” and “my own countries” with clearer terms, and limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. This morning I read headlines on a news website and an article in my local newspaper about a recent traffic accident and an economic update in my country.

建議: Give a direct response and then clarify what topics you discuss with friends, using correct plural forms and a linking word like “however” to contrast. Be specific about examples of topics.

範例: Not very often. However, I frequently discuss political articles and government policies with friends, especially when there is an important election or a controversial law.

× Yes I am. I'm interested in news as an adult and also I feel like if you are adult you have to know at least current situation of the world or your own countries or economic. If you learn things and if you know things you can.

✓ Yes, I am. I'm interested in the news as an adult, and I feel that if you are an adult you should know at least the current situation of the world, your own country, and the economy. If you learn and know things, you can understand them.

Problems: missing articles ('the news', 'an adult', 'the current situation'), incorrect noun forms ('countries' -> 'country', 'economic' -> 'the economy'), and awkward clauses. Use present simple for general truths (I feel, you should know). Suggestions: add appropriate articles, use singular where referring to 'your own country', replace 'economic' with 'the economy', and simplify conditional clauses ('If you learn and know things').

× I'm looking for a certain consensus of the news, so I always research the news from several directions, like on Internet, on newspaper, from some kind of articles.

✓ I'm looking for a consensus on the news, so I always research it from several sources, such as the Internet, newspapers, and various articles.

Problems: wrong prepositions ('consensus of' -> 'consensus on'; 'on Internet' -> 'on the Internet'; 'on newspaper' -> 'in newspapers'); awkward phrases ('from several directions' -> 'from several sources'). Suggestions: use 'consensus on', 'research it', and 'such as the Internet, newspapers, and articles'.

× No, I don't. But I'm an adult. I have to know things by several information from several sources. That way I can get certain informations.

✓ No, I don't. But I'm an adult. I have to know things from several sources. That way I can get certain information.

Problems: uncountable noun 'information' was pluralized incorrectly ('informations') and the preposition 'by' is wrong when talking about sources. Suggestions: use 'information' (uncountable) and 'from several sources'; 'get certain information' is natural English.

× Yes, I did. I always read the newspaper and the Internet news and some kind of article to research the depths of the news and the incidents and accidents all over the world, including my own countries.

✓ Yes, I did. I always read the newspaper and Internet news and articles to research the details of incidents and accidents all over the world, including my own country.

Problems: tense is OK but word choice and articles incorrect ('some kind of article' -> 'articles'; 'the depths of the news' -> 'the details of incidents'; 'my own countries' -> 'my own country'). Suggestions: use plural 'articles' or 'an article' depending on meaning, replace 'depths' with 'details', and use singular 'country' when referring to one's nation.

× I don't really often talk with my friends about the news, but I frequently talk about articles, politics, government stuffs. I like to discuss things with my friends.

✓ I don't often talk with my friends about the news, but I frequently talk about articles, politics, and government matters. I like discussing things with my friends.

Problems: adverb placement ('don't really often' is awkward; move 'often' after auxiliary), incorrect plural/word form ('stuffs' is incorrect; use 'matters' or 'issues'), and style (prefer 'I like discussing' or 'I like to discuss'). Suggestions: place adverbs correctly, replace 'stuffs' with 'matters' or 'issues', and use gerund 'discussing' for natural speech.