数字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (because, so) correctly and avoid repetition.

範例: Not really. I’m not good at remembering numbers because I’ve always struggled with maths. For example, I forget phone numbers easily, so I chose a medical field where complex calculations are not required.

建議: Give a clear direct answer first, then add a specific condition and an example. Improve grammar (use articles, plurals) and link ideas with words like however and unless.

範例: Probably not much. As a physiotherapist I only need basic numbers, such as measuring patient progress or dosages. However, if I change careers to finance or engineering, I would definitely use numbers a lot.

建議: Answer directly, then give one clear reason and a short example or consequence. Correct verb forms and reduce repetition. Use linking words like because and therefore.

範例: No, I didn’t enjoy studying maths as a child because I always found it difficult to understand. Therefore I avoided careers that require heavy math and eventually chose a medical profession.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and then specific details. Clean up grammar and chronology, and use linking words such as for example and because. Keep it concise and avoid filler words.

範例: The number 23 is very important to me. For example, my birthday is on April 23, my husband’s birthday is on September 23, and our wedding anniversary also falls on April 23, so I consider 23 a lucky number.

× Honestly speaking I am not good in remembering numbers and I found it incredibly difficult for me.

✓ Honestly speaking, I am not good at remembering numbers and I find it incredibly difficult.

Use 'good at' (preposition) not 'good in'. Change tense 'found' to 'find' to match general present ability. Remove redundant 'for me'. Use comma after introductory phrase. Grammar problem type's ID: 11

× So I chose medical because there are no subject related to maths I I cannot remember number for a long time.

✓ So I chose medicine because there are no subjects related to maths, and I cannot remember numbers for a long time.

Use noun 'medicine' not adjective 'medical'. 'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' and 'related to maths' needs comma and conjunction. Remove duplicate 'I'. Use plural 'numbers'. This fixes sentence structure and agreement. Grammar problem type's ID: 26

× As a physiotherapist I have no needs of any number rather than some basic number.

✓ As a physiotherapist, I have no need for any numbers other than some basic ones.

Use uncountable 'need' not 'needs' and preposition 'need for'. 'Number' should be plural 'numbers' and 'other than' better phrasing. Use 'ones' to refer to numbers. Added comma after introductory phrase. Grammar problem type's ID: 14

× But if I change my career or I do something else instead of my field.

✓ But if I change my career or do something outside my field,

This is a sentence fragment; combine clauses without repeating subject 'I' and use 'outside my field' for clarity. The comma shows continuation. Grammar problem type's ID: 26

× So definitely I use number in future work.

✓ Then I would definitely use numbers in future work.

Use conditional/future-in-the-future phrasing: 'would' or 'will' plus plural 'numbers'. 'Use number' is incorrect; use 'use numbers'. Grammar problem type's ID: 7

× But if I remain in my same field I have no need to use any different.

✓ But if I remain in the same field, I will have no need to use different numbers.

Phrase 'any different' is vague and ungrammatical; clarify 'different numbers'. Use future 'will have' to match situation and add comma. Grammar problem type's ID: 14

× No, I did not like to studying math when I was a child because I found it quite difficult for me.

✓ No, I did not like studying math when I was a child because I found it quite difficult.

Use 'like studying' (gerund) not 'like to studying'. Remove redundant 'for me'. Past tense 'did not like' and 'found' are consistent. Grammar problem type's ID: 8},{