自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản, sử dụng thì quá khứ cho hành động trong quá khứ, và sắp xếp câu rõ ràng. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ (thời điểm, tần suất, hoạt động làm cùng). Tránh ngắt quãng và tiếng lấp đầy (uh). Ví dụ: dùng “I had a bike when I was two” hoặc “I used to have a bike” và thêm liên từ đơn giản để nối câu.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about two years old, and I often rode it on weekends with my friends around the neighborhood.

建議: Cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No/Somewhat) và giải thích lý do rõ ràng, dùng từ vựng phù hợp như “popular”, “common”, “useful”, “for short trips” và tránh câu thiếu nghĩa. Tránh cấu trúc điều kiện không đúng như ‘If the bikes are popular’. Nên dùng liên từ để mở rộng (because, so, for example).

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short journeys and commuting because they are cheap, convenient, and help avoid traffic.

× Yes, I have a buy when I when I were two and uh, on the weekend, uh, I often. Play.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was two and, on weekends, I often rode it.

Student used incorrect verb forms and words: 'have a buy' should be 'had a bike' (incorrect vocabulary and past tense needed). 'were' should be 'was' to agree with singular subject I. 'on the weekend' is changed to 'on weekends' for habitual action, and 'Play' should be 'rode it' to use the past tense of 'ride' and complete the clause. Suggestion: use simple past for past events (had, was, rode) and correct vocabulary (bike).

× Oh, that's true. If the bikes are popular in my country, it's very. You force your own.

✓ Oh, that's true. Bikes are very popular in my country; you can see many people riding them.

Original has several problems: 'If the bikes are popular in my country' uses an unnecessary conditional 'if' and awkward structure; simple present 'Bikes are very popular in my country' states a general fact. 'it's very. You force your own' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended meaning is 'you can see many people riding them' or 'people use them a lot'. Suggestion: state general truths with simple present and use clear verbs like 'see' or 'use' rather than vague fragments.