自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You need to give a clear, grammatical topic sentence and then one or two concise supporting details. Avoid fillers and repetition. Correct verb forms and vocabulary are necessary (e.g., say “I had a bike” and use ‘rode’ or ‘cycled’). Keep answers natural and within 3–4 short sentences. Use a linking word if you add a reason or detail (e.g., “because” or “so”).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it to school because it was faster than walking. Sometimes I and my friends raced around the neighborhood for fun.

建議: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons and a brief comparison. Avoid hesitation sounds and incorrect word forms (use “bikes” not “buys”). Use linking words like “but” and “now” correctly to show contrast. Keep it concise and specific (mention trends, reasons, or examples).

範例: I think bicycles used to be very popular in my country, but now motorbikes are more common. This is because motorbikes are faster and more convenient for longer distances, while bicycles are mainly used for exercise or short trips.

× Yes, when, uh, when I when I was dry, I usually buy go to school.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I usually rode my bike to school.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems: repeated words ('when I when I'), wrong word choice ('dry' instead of 'child'), mixed verb forms ('usually buy go to school'). This fits 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Correction uses correct noun 'child', past tense verb 'rode' to match 'when I was' (past time reference), and a clear word order: subject + past habit verb + object + purpose/place. Suggestion: remove repetitions, choose correct vocabulary, and use past tense for past habits (e.g., 'usually rode', 'used to ride').

× MMM I think in the past buy is uh buys are popular in my country but now motorbike is common more and more common.

✓ I think in the past bikes were popular in my country, but now motorbikes are becoming more and more common.

Errors include incorrect verb forms and tense agreement. The speaker refers to a past general situation, so past tense 'were' is required rather than 'is'. The noun 'buy' is incorrect; 'bikes' is intended. Also word order and progressive change require 'are becoming' or 'are more common' — here 'are becoming more and more common' fits. This matches 'Present tense issue' (ID 6) because present and past tenses were mixed incorrectly. Suggestion: use 'were' for past states and 'are becoming' for ongoing change; use correct plural nouns ('bikes', 'motorbikes').