自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, accuracy and fluency. Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two concise supporting details (when you got it and how you used it). Use linking words (e.g., “but,” “however,” “then”) to connect ideas. Keep responses to no more than 4–5 short sentences.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I bought one soon after I finished school so I could commute to college. I used it every day because it was cheaper and more convenient than taking public transport.

建議: Improve grammatical completeness and provide more specific supporting details and a linking phrase. Give a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons with examples or comparisons. Avoid repeating the same phrase; vary vocabulary (e.g., “widely used,” “affordable,” “practical”).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many middle-class families favor them because they are affordable and economical to run. For example, people often use motorbikes for daily commutes and short trips, especially where traffic is heavy.

× I does not have a bike during my childhood, but after my after I complete my schooling I got it.

✓ I did not have a bike during my childhood, but after I completed my schooling I got one.

This sentence has multiple errors: incorrect auxiliary verb 'does not' with past context (use 'did not') and incorrect present tense 'complete' instead of past 'completed' for a past event (Past tense issue - ID 5). Also 'after my after' is redundant and 'it' is vague when referring to 'a bike' (singular/plural and clarity). Use 'one' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: use 'did not' for past negative, use past simple 'completed' for a completed action, remove duplicate words, and use 'one' or repeat 'bike' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes, I think bikes are commonly used in my country because middle class families.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are commonly used in my country because many people in middle-class families use them.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb in the 'because' clause (Sentence without a verb / Sentence structure error - ID 23 and 26). 'Middle class families' alone is a noun phrase that cannot explain why bikes are used. Also add quantifier 'many people' and hyphenate 'middle-class' as an adjective. Suggestion: include a verb to complete the clause and clarify who uses bikes. Grammar problem type ID:23

× Middle class families usually prefer bikes to travel.

✓ Middle-class families usually prefer bikes for travelling.

This sentence needs a hyphen in 'middle-class' when used as an adjective (adjective form/orthography - ID 13) and 'to travel' after 'prefer' is less natural than 'for travelling' or 'to travel by bike.' Also 'prefer bikes to travel' is a fragment that slightly misuses infinitive structure (Sentence structure issue - ID 26). Suggestion: hyphenate 'middle-class' and use 'for travelling' or 'for travelling short distances' to clarify the purpose.