自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: First, don't repeat the examiner's question. Give a direct answer (yes/no) with a brief topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'teenagers', 'petrol' or 'gas', not 'petrols').

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and rode it to school and to my friends' houses every day. Because our neighborhood was small and safe, I spent a lot of time cycling, which helped me become confident and healthy.

建議: Good idea and relevant content. Improve accuracy and naturalness: correct plural forms ('teenagers'), avoid redundancy ('petrols and gas' -> 'petrol' or 'gas'), and use linking words to make reasons clear. Be more specific with details (e.g., statistics, examples of cities or groups). Keep to under 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many teenagers and adults prefer cycling in cities because petrol is expensive and public transport can be unreliable. As a result, commuting by bike is often faster and much cheaper than driving.

× Yes, in my country a lot of teenager and adults mostly use bikes instead of cars because of the economy and the high prices of petrols and gas.

✓ Yes, in my country a lot of teenagers and adults mostly use bikes instead of cars because of the economy and the high prices of petrol and gas.

The sentence uses singular 'teenager' where the plural 'teenagers' is required because it refers to many people. Also 'petrols' is incorrect: 'petrol' is an uncountable noun in English and should not take a plural form. Change 'petrols' to 'petrol' (or 'gasoline' if preferred). Suggestion: use plural forms when referring to multiple people (teenagers) and use the uncountable form for substances (petrol).

× Yes, in my country a lot of teenager and adults mostly use bikes instead of cars because of the economy and the high prices of petrols and gas.

✓ Yes, in my country many teenagers and adults mostly use bikes instead of cars because of the economy and the high prices of petrol and gas.

The phrase 'a lot of' is acceptable but paired with a singular noun 'teenager' is incorrect. Replacing 'a lot of teenager and adults' with 'many teenagers and adults' makes quantifier and noun form agree. 'Many' works naturally with plural count nouns. Also keeping 'the high prices of petrol and gas' clarifies the cause. Suggestion: match quantifiers with correct noun number: 'many' + plural noun.