自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答をもっと直接的で自然にし、理由を具体的に述べてください。冗長な「uh」を減らし、時制に注意して過去の事柄は過去形で答えます（例：I didn’t have a bike）。理由は具体的にし、例や簡単な状況説明（交通事情や家族の考えなど）を加えると良いです。文は3文以内に収め、つなぎの表現（because, so, therefore）を使って論理的に繋げてください。

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was too dangerous. For example, there was a lot of traffic near our house, so they preferred I use public transport.

建議: 質問に対してはっきりした意見を述べ、理由を明確に示してください。不自然な言い換えや繰り返し（"like"の多用）を避け、文法を整えてください。比較や具体例（都市部では電車が便利、郊外では車が主流など）を使うと説得力が増します。接続詞（however, because, for example）を使って論理的に説明しましょう。

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer trains and cars. For example, in cities the public transport network is extensive, so few people use bicycles for daily commuting.

× Uh, no, I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense, while 'didn't have' is the correct past tense negative form. To improve, match verb tense to the time reference in the question and use auxiliary 'did' for past simple negatives.

× Uh, this is because, uh, riding the bike is dangerous.

✓ This is because riding a bike was dangerous.

The response refers to childhood (past), so the clause should use past tense. Also article usage: 'riding the bike' sounds specific; 'riding a bike' is general. Improve by aligning tense and using the indefinite article for general statements about an activity.

× Uh, ICE, I think there's a bike is not popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are not very popular in my country.

The original mixes 'there's a bike' (there is a bike) with a general idea; use simple present plural for general statements: 'bikes are not very popular.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word order for negation. Avoid contracted or filler words like 'ICE' that are unclear.

× Uh, this is because uh, and Japan, Japanese is like Japanese like to like train and car.

✓ This is because in Japan Japanese people prefer trains and cars.

Original has redundant and incorrect pronoun/noun usage and repeated 'like.' Use 'Japanese people' as subject and 'prefer' for habitual preference. Preposition 'in' is needed for location. Improve by simplifying and using correct noun phrase and verb.

× Uh, so.

✓ So, that's why bikes are less popular.

Fragment 'So.' is incomplete. Provide a full sentence that concludes the explanation. Improve by completing the thought and linking it to previous sentence.