自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 在回答中要更直接并且条理清晰地表达主旨，避免重复和语法错误；用一到两句简单支持细节，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。注意时态一致和单复数形式。可以把句子控制在最多五句内。

範例: Yes, my mother bought me a bicycle when I was a child. However, I never used it much because I had difficulty balancing and coordinating my body. As a result, the bike was left unused most of the time. I still find balancing on a bike challenging even now.

建議: 回答要更准确地表达观点并提供具体原因或例子，避免语法错误和重复用词；使用连接词（for example, because, so）使逻辑更清楚。修正如“few bad places”这类错误，改用“few suitable places”。控制在不超过五句。

範例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in Hong Kong. This is because the city is small and there are few suitable places to ride safely. In addition, public transport is so convenient that most people prefer buses and the MTR. For these reasons, cycling is less common here.

× Yes, umm, when I was free my mum bought me a bicycle.

✓ Yes. When I was a child my mum bought me a bicycle.

原句時態本身（bought）為過去式無誤，但句中片語 "when I was free" 與語境不符，面試問題問兒時是否有單車，應使用表明兒時的時間狀語如 "when I was a child"。建議用更準確的時間表達以符合上下文。

× But the main problem is umm, I'm not really good at balancing myself, coordinating my bodies even now.

✓ But the main problem is that I'm not really good at balancing or coordinating my body even now.

原句中使用了不合適的反身代詞與複數名詞 —— “balancing myself” 用法在此可簡化為 “balancing”，而 “bodies” 不合語境，應為單數 “body”。須注意主語為單一個人，使用單數名詞和不多餘的反身形式。建議刪去多餘的反身代詞並改為單數名詞。

× So I didn't use a lot of bike bicycle that my mom bought for me and eventually just bring there and I just stay.

✓ So I didn't use the bicycle my mom bought for me much, and eventually I just left it there.

原句結構混亂：出現了重複詞（"bike bicycle"）、錯誤的動詞時態/形式（"bring there" 用法錯誤），以及不完整的短語（"I just stay" 不清楚）。建議去掉重複詞，將動詞改為正確的過去式或不定式短語，並明確表達 "把單車放在那裡並不再使用" 的意思。

× Well, in Hong Kong bikes are quite unpopular because umm, you know, Hong Kong is a small place and actually there's there are very few bad places for you to ride bicycles.

✓ Well, in Hong Kong bikes are quite unpopular because, you know, Hong Kong is a small place and actually there are very few good places for you to ride bicycles.

原句中使用了 "bad places" 與語境相反，且重複了 "there's there are"。應使用 "good places"（合適的騎行地點）來表達因地理限制造成的不流行。其次刪去重複的助動詞。建議檢查詞義以確保與想表達的意思一致。

× And also because of umm the very convenient transportation people don't really use bicycles to.

✓ And also because of the very convenient transportation, people don't really use bicycles.

原句末尾多餘 "to"，造成語法錯誤。此處主語為複數（people），助動詞 don't 正確，但多餘的不定式標記應刪除。建議句尾直接停止或補上動詞短語（例如 "to get around"）。