自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, clear answer first, then add one or two specific supporting details. Keep sentences natural and concise (no more than 5). Use simple past tense and correct word order. For example, start with “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.” Then add details such as who gave it to you, how you used it, or a memory, using linking words like “because” or “and.” Avoid repeating greetings or asking questions back to the examiner.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day. I remember learning to ride with my father because he held the seat until I gained confidence.

建議: Answer directly with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “however.” Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases; choose appropriate vocabulary (e.g., “motorbikes,” “bicycles,” “popular,” “common”). Keep to 1–3 supporting sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use motorbikes and bicycles for daily transport. For example, students and delivery workers often choose motorbikes since they are cheap and convenient. However, bicycles are less common in big cities due to heavy traffic.

× Hello. Hello. Do you have a bike? When you know where are they? Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes. I had a bike when I was a child.

The original contains multiple issues: repetition, wrong tense, incorrect question word order and mismatched pronouns. The expected answer should respond to past possession (use past tense 'had') and be a complete declarative sentence. Suggestion: use 'I had a bike when I was a child.' Keep subject-verb order correct and match tense to the question.

× My my popular my country uh, this popular bike in royal in fact, uh, bullet.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country. In particular, Royal Enfield motorcycles, known as Bullets, are quite popular.

This sentence is fragmented and unclear. The student repeats words and mixes noun phrases without correct articles or verb forms. The question asks generally about popularity in the present; use present tense 'are popular.' Provide a clear noun phrase: 'Royal Enfield motorcycles, known as Bullets.' Suggestion: answer concisely: 'Bikes are popular in my country. For example, Royal Enfield Bullets are common.'