自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Use the past tense consistently, correct vocabulary (bike), and give a concise, logical answer with one topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid unnecessary filler and questions. For example, say who bought it, when you got it, and a short detail about how you used it.

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was five, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood almost every afternoon. It helped me learn balance quickly and gave me more freedom to visit friends nearby.

建議: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and specific supporting details. Replace unclear words (PIE) with 'bikes' and correct subject-verb agreement. Use linking words (for example, also, because) to connect ideas and give concrete examples of who rides bikes and where.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, children ride them to school and many adults use bikes for short trips in the city because cycling is cheap and convenient. Also, you can see people cycling in parks and on bike lanes throughout the city.

× Oh yes, when I was a child, I have a bite that my parents bought it for me.

✓ Oh yes, when I was a child, I had a bike that my parents bought for me.

The speaker is referring to a past situation, so the verb should be in the past tense. 'have' is present tense; use 'had'. 'bite' is a misspelling of 'bike' (not covered by the listed types but corrected). Also, English does not require the repeated object pronoun 'it' after 'bought' when the object 'a bike' is already stated. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs consistently for past events and avoid unnecessary pronouns (e.g., 'I had a bike that my parents bought for me').

× Why? What? Why were five years old?

✓ Why? What? I was five years old.

This fragment is ungrammatical. The intended meaning appears to be stating age in the past: 'I was five years old.' The original 'Why were five years old?' incorrectly omits the subject and uses the plural verb 'were' with no subject. Suggestion: Include the subject 'I' and use the singular past form 'was' for first person singular.

× Oh yes, I think PIE is popular in my countries because not not even children is the older people and teenagers have to ride a bike in very in every corner of the city.

✓ Oh yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because not only children but also older people and teenagers have to ride bikes in every corner of the city.

Multiple issues here: 'PIE' seems to be a typo for 'bikes' and 'my countries' should be singular 'my country' unless the speaker has multiple countries; assuming singular, change to 'my country'. 'not not even' is incorrect and should be 'not only ... but also' to connect two groups. 'children is the older people' has subject-verb agreement errors: 'children' is plural so 'is' is wrong, and the phrase is misordered. Use 'older people and teenagers' as parallel noun phrases. 'have to ride a bike' should match plurality: use 'have to ride bikes'. Remove the extra 'in' before 'every corner'. Suggestions: Fix typos, use correct correlative conjunction 'not only... but also', ensure subjects and verbs agree, and make noun phrases parallel.