自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on producing a clear, direct response with correct tense and concise sentences. Start with a straightforward topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and avoid confusing time references. Link ideas with simple connectors (e.g., because, so, when). Keep the answer within 2–4 sentences.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought bicycles were dangerous for kids, so they never bought one for me. As a result, I only started thinking about getting a bike when I was older, but I still don’t own one now.

建議: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Correct basic grammar (plural nouns, comparative forms) and avoid repetition. Use linking words (because, therefore, for example) to make the answer coherent, and include a brief example or contrast to enrich the answer.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are much cheaper to buy and run than cars. For example, many students and commuters use motorbikes or bicycles to save money on fuel and parking. Therefore, two-wheelers are common in both cities and rural areas.

× No, I don't have any bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about past possession ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense. Using 'don't' (present) is incorrect. Also 'any bike' is unnatural; use 'a bike' for singular countable noun. Suggestion: use past simple 'didn't have' for past facts.

× When I was a child, even right now, I was around 18 year old and I doesn't have to bike because my family thinks that bike is dangerous for kids.

✓ When I was a child — actually I am about 18 years old now — I didn't have to ride a bike because my family thought bicycles were dangerous for children.

This sentence mixes past and present tenses and misuses verbs. 'When I was a child' requires past tense: 'didn't have to ride'. 'Even right now' contradicted childhood; clarify with 'actually I am about 18 years old now'. 'I doesn't' is wrong subject-verb agreement; correct is 'I don't' for present or 'I didn't' for past. Use plural 'years old' and 'bicycles' as general plural. Use 'thought' for past opinion.

× my family thinks that bike is dangerous for kids.

✓ My family thought that bicycles were dangerous for kids.

If referring to their past belief, use past tense 'thought' (third person singular regular past). 'Bike' should be plural or 'a bike' and 'were' matches plural 'bicycles' or is correct for 'is' in past context. Also capitalize sentence start.

× So when you grow up, when you adult and my family give me a pie, but then I just think about the bike.

✓ So when I grew up and my family gave me a pie, I thought about the bike.

The sentence incorrectly mixes second person 'you' with first person 'I' and uses wrong verb forms. Use consistent subject 'I' and past tense 'grew up' and 'gave'. 'When you adult' is ungrammatical; use 'when I became an adult' if needed. Remove unnecessary 'but then' which breaks sentence flow.

× But right now I doesn't have any bike.

✓ But right now I don't have a bike.

Use present tense for current situation: 'don't have' (I do not) not 'doesn't' which is third person singular. Use 'a bike' for a single countable noun, not 'any' in affirmative statements.

× I do think that bike is most popular in my country because bike is more cheaper than car and and other like vehicles.

✓ I do think that bicycles are the most popular in my country because they are cheaper than cars and other vehicles.

Use plural 'bicycles' and plural verb 'are' for general statements. 'The most popular' needs the definite article 'the'. 'More cheaper' is incorrect: use 'cheaper' (comparative) without 'more'. Use plural 'cars' and 'other vehicles' for general comparison. Remove duplicated 'and'.

× So most people purchase bike and send a car or in other vehicles because they are cheaper.

✓ So most people buy bicycles instead of cars or other vehicles because bicycles are cheaper.

Use 'buy' rather than 'purchase' with natural collocations, make nouns plural for general statements, and use 'instead of' to show preference. 'Send a car' is incorrect; likely meant 'instead of a car'. Clarify with 'bicycles are cheaper' to show reason.