自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, expand briefly, and add a supporting detail. Use past tense for past experiences, give one specific memory or reason, and keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was six, and I used to ride it to visit my friend who lived two streets away.

建議: Make the response clear and relevant: answer directly, use correct grammar, avoid repetition, and give a specific reason or example. Use linking words (because, for example, so) to connect ideas. Also correct vocabulary — say 'ride a bike' not 'writing a bike'. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise; for example, you can see lots of cyclists commuting to work in the mornings.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense, so the short affirmative response must also be past tense. Using 'have' (present) is incorrect. Use 'did' to match past tense. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Yeah, I think it is popular in my country and.

✓ Yeah, I think they are popular in my country.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). The subject is plural, so use 'they are' rather than 'it is'. Also remove the trailing 'and.' Ensure verb 'think' is present tense which is correct here. Suggestion: say 'I think bicycles/bikes are popular in my country.'

× Yeah, I like to to writing a bike.

✓ Yeah, I like riding a bike.

This sentence has multiple errors: the phrase 'like to to writing' repeats 'to' and mixes infinitive with gerund incorrectly. After 'like' you can use either 'to ride' or the gerund 'riding'. Also 'writing' is the wrong verb; the appropriate verb for using a bike is 'ride'. Suggestion: use 'I like riding a bike' or 'I like to ride a bike.'