自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không phù hợp thì hiện tại/ quá khứ. Nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng thì quá khứ, cung cấp câu chủ đề và thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (mô tả loại xe, cảm xúc hoặc kỷ niệm). Dùng liên từ nếu cần để mở rộng mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without training wheels.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng ngôn ngữ và ngữ pháp mơ hồ, lỗi cấu trúc và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ “stand by a popular in York”). Nên trả lời trực tiếp, rồi giải thích với lý do cụ thể, dùng từ vựng phù hợp (popular, common, used for commuting/leisure) và liên từ để nối ý.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. In cities, they are common for commuting to work, while in rural areas people often ride bikes for leisure and errands.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-tense question 'Did you have... when you were a child?' so the response should be in the past tense. 'Do' is present tense; change to 'did' to match the question's time frame. Suggestion: Always match your verb tense to the time referenced in the question (past → use did/didn't or past simple verbs).

× Yes I do. I stand by a popular in York, in the country.

✓ Yes, they are. I would say bikes are popular in York and in the countryside.

Multiple issues: first, the pronoun and verb in 'Yes I do' are inappropriate here (see prior correction). The phrase 'I stand by a popular' is ungrammatical and unclear: 'stand by' is incorrect verb choice and 'a popular' lacks a noun. Also 'in the country' likely intends 'in the countryside' or 'in the country as a whole'. Correction provides a clear, grammatically correct response that fits the present-tense question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' Use 'they are' to refer to 'bikes' and 'I would say' to express opinion. Suggestions: Use appropriate subject pronouns, select verbs that convey intended meaning (e.g., 'are popular', 'I think', 'I would say'), and choose correct nouns for places ('countryside' or 'country').