自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the grammar and make the answer more natural and slightly more informative. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two brief supporting details using a linking word. Avoid redundancy and limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, I got it for my seventh birthday and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon.

建議: Answer directly and use present tense for a general opinion. Give a reason or a brief example using a linking word to support your view. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘common’, ‘widely used’) and keep to 2–3 short sentences.

範例: No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience. However, they are becoming slightly more common in big cities due to traffic and bike lanes.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'have' with a past time expression 'when I was a child'. This is a tense mismatch. Use past simple 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past situations (I had, I went, I lived).

× No, it wasn't popular.

✓ No, they weren't very popular.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). The student used singular 'it' and 'wasn't', causing number and reference errors and incorrect agreement. Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural past verb 'weren't'. Also add 'very' or similar if you want to soften the statement. Suggestion: ensure pronoun agrees with the noun and use past simple to describe popularity in the past (they weren't popular).