自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp cần được sửa (ví dụ: bike, gave, it was my birthday, I loved it). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng với một câu chủ đề, sau đó có 1–2 câu bổ trợ cụ thể (ví dụ tuổi, ai tặng, cảm xúc hoặc kỉ niệm). Sử dụng các liên từ đơn giản để nối các ý (for example, because, and). Giữ tối đa 4–5 câu, tránh lặp từ như “very”.

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was ten — my dad gave it to me as a birthday present. I loved it because it made me feel independent and I rode it every day with my friends. For example, we used to cycle to the park after school.

建議: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: "my country is" thay vì "my is", và câu nên rõ ràng hơn). Trả lời trực tiếp rồi đưa thêm lý do cụ thể (vì tiết kiệm chi phí, tốt cho sức khỏe, giảm ô nhiễm) và dùng liên từ để liên kết các ý (for example, as a result). Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể hoặc so sánh sẽ giúp câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people prefer cycling because it is affordable and eco-friendly, and it also helps them stay fit. For example, commuters in the city often use bikes for short trips to avoid traffic and save money.

× I had a bite when I was 10 years old.

✓ I had a bike when I was 10 years old.

The student used the word 'bite' which is a spelling error rather than a tense error. However this sentence context expects past tense and 'had' is correct. Replace 'bite' with 'bike' to match intended meaning. Suggestion: proofread for spelling and ensure the noun matches context.

× My dad give me one.

✓ My dad gave me one.

The verb 'give' does not match the past tense subject. The sentence refers to a past event, so the past form 'gave' is required. Suggestion: use regular past or irregular past forms correctly (here 'give' -> 'gave').

× It's my birthday and I'm very love it.

✓ It was my birthday and I loved it.

The original mixes present tense 'It's' and present continuous 'I'm' with the stative verb 'love' causing ungrammatical structure. The event is past (when he was 10), so use past tense: 'It was my birthday' and 'I loved it.' Also 'very love' is incorrect collocation; 'love' is not modified by 'very' in this way. Suggestion: match tense to the time frame and remove incorrect modifiers.

× Yes I do because nowadays my is friendly with the environment and people often ride a bike to be healthy.

✓ Yes I do because nowadays my country is more environmentally friendly and people often ride bikes to stay healthy.

The clause 'my is friendly with the environment' is missing a noun after 'my' and uses unnatural phrasing. Also 'friendly with the environment' is better expressed as 'environmentally friendly.' 'Ride a bike' can be pluralized to 'ride bikes' for general statements. 'To be healthy' is acceptable but 'to stay healthy' is more natural. Suggestion: include the missing noun (country), use correct adjectives/adverb forms, and pluralize for general habits.