自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: حسّن القواعد والزمن (Verb tense) واجعل الإجابة أكثر طبيعية واستخدم جملة موضوع ثم تفاصيل مختصرة. على سبيل المثال، استخدم الماضي البسيط عندما تتحدث عن الطفولة، وصل الجمل باستخدام كلمات ربط بسيطة مثل “so” أو “and”. تجنّب التكرار وقلل الكلمات الحشو.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to cycle to school every day, and it was my main way of getting around, so I became quite confident riding it.

建議: اجعل الرأي واضحًا واستخدم أسبابًا أو أمثلة محددة لدعم رأيك. تجنّب التردد (مثل "uh") واستخدم عبارات ربط مثل "however" أو "but" وقدم تفاصيل عن من يستخدم الدراجات ولماذا.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. However, some people, especially students and delivery workers, use bicycles because they are cheap and convenient for short trips.

× Yes, I have a bike when I child and I go to my school with my bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I went to school with it.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when you were a child'), so verbs must be in the past tense. Use 'had' instead of 'have' (present). Include the auxiliary 'was' for 'I was a child'. Use past tense 'went' for the action of traveling to school. Replace the redundant 'my bike' with the pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition. Suggested improvement: identify the time frame and align all verbs to the same tense; use appropriate subject complements and pronouns to avoid repetition.

× No, that's not popular in our country, but, uh, some people, some type of people, uh, use.

✓ No, bikes are not very popular in our country, but some people do use them.

The original sentence misuses 'that' to refer to 'bikes' and leaves the verb incomplete ('use' with no object). Use the plural noun 'bikes' and a clear subject 'bikes are not very popular'. Use 'some people do use them' to provide a complete verb phrase and object pronoun 'them' referring back to 'bikes'. Suggested improvement: explicitly state the noun you refer to, complete the verb phrase, and use the correct object pronoun for clarity.