自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваша фраза повторяет вопрос экзаменатора вместо того, чтобы отвечать на него. Говорите прямо и давайте короткий основной ответ, затем добавляйте 1–2 конкретных поддерживающих предложения. Используйте связки (for example, when, because) чтобы сделать ответ логичным. Удерживайтесь от излишней длины (не более 5 предложений).

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because my parents encouraged outdoor play, I used to ride it almost every day after school.

建議: Ответ слишком короткий и не даёт конкретики. Давайте прямой ответ, затем объяснение и пример. Используйте связки (because, for example, also) и приведите конкретные причины или наблюдения. Оставайтесь в пределах 3–5 предложений.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see bike lanes and many students cycling to university. Also, bike-sharing services have become more common recently.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure error (type 26). The appropriate short answer to a past simple yes/no question uses the auxiliary did plus subject: 'Yes, I did.' Suggestion: respond directly to the question using the correct short form for past simple (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't').

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's answer 'Yes, I do.' is vague and uses a present simple short answer that does not match the examiner's question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' While 'Yes, I do' can be grammatically acceptable for some verbs, here the full sentence clarifies opinion. This is a present tense/clarity issue (type 6). Suggestion: give a full sentence expressing opinion in present simple: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country' or add brief reason: 'Yes, I think so because many people use them for commuting.'