自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question, so it did not answer. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or short statement), then add one or two specific supporting details or a brief example. Keep it natural, avoid repeating the question, and limit your answer to up to five sentences. Use linking words (for example, because, so, when) to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was seven, and I practiced riding it every afternoon in the park. Because my neighborhood was quiet, I felt safe learning to ride without much help from my parents.

建議: Again, you repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an opinion. To improve, state your opinion clearly first (Yes/No/Partly), then support it with specific reasons and a brief example. Use linking words (for instance, however, because, therefore) to make your answer coherent and concise.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short journeys to work or school because they are inexpensive and avoid traffic. However, in large cities, cycling is less common due to busy roads and limited bike lanes.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/response error rather than a grammatical form error. The correct response uses past simple 'had' to match the question's past tense. Suggestion: answer questions directly using the tense implied by the question (here use past simple) and include a subject and verb to form a complete sentence.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/response error rather than a grammatical form error. To respond appropriately, use the present simple 'think' to match the question and provide a clear opinion. Suggestion: when asked for opinion in present, reply with 'Yes/No' plus a full clause (subject + verb) or give a brief reason (e.g., 'Yes, I think so because...').