自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct vocabulary and grammar, organize into a clear topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details, and avoid repetition. Use correct words (bike, riding) and simple grammar: say you had a blue bike, describe how you used it and one specific benefit. Use linking words (for example, also) to make it coherent.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle that I used to ride to the park and to visit friends. For example, riding it every day improved my balance and fitness, and it also helped me become more independent.

建議: Avoid repetition and make the answer more specific with examples and linking words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give 1–2 concrete reasons (commuting, cost, environment) and an illustrative example. Use correct collocations (ride bikes, commute by bike).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. In many cities people commute by bike because it is cheap and often faster than driving. For example, every morning I see students and office workers cycling to school and work to avoid traffic and save money.

× Of course, I had a back when I was a child.

✓ Of course, I had a bike when I was a child.

The word 'back' is a typo for 'bike' (a countable noun). This is not a pluralization error but a wrong word; however it affects number/agreement and meaning. Replace 'back' with the correct singular noun 'bike' to match the intended meaning and keep singular form consistent with 'a'.

× In my childhood I had a blue back and I think reading back is a interesting and exercise thing.

✓ In my childhood I had a blue bike and I think riding a bike is an interesting and healthy activity.

Multiple issues: 'back' should be 'bike'; 'reading' should be 'riding' (wrong verb); 'a interesting' uses incorrect article before a vowel sound — should be 'an interesting'; 'exercise thing' is unnatural; use 'healthy' or 'good exercise' and 'activity'. The corrections fix word choice and article usage and produce natural collocation.

× Not only can it improve my reading skill but also can it improve my health of body.

✓ Not only can it improve my riding skills, but it can also improve my physical health.

Errors: 'reading skill' should be 'riding skills' to match 'bike'; 'health of body' is unnatural — use 'physical health'; word order in 'Not only... but also' is awkward: common structure is 'Not only can X do Y, but it can also do Z' or 'Not only does X improve A, but it also improves B.' Also pluralize 'skill' to 'skills' for general ability.

× Of course, yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

Redundant 'Of course, yes' is stylistic rather than grammatical; corrected to concise natural response. Tense (present) is correct.

× In the morning we can see different people ride the bikes to walk, to study and so on.

✓ In the morning we can see different people riding bikes to go to work or to school, and so on.

Use of bare infinitive 'ride' after 'see' is possible in English (I saw him ride), but here 'see different people riding' is more natural. 'Ride the bikes to walk' is incorrect — you ride to go somewhere, not 'to walk'. Replace with 'to go to work or to school' which matches likely meaning. Also omit article 'the' before 'bikes' for general reference.