自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with pronunciation and word choice (e.g., "stopped riding it" not "stopped lighting it"); avoid filler sounds like "uh"; keep sentences concise and correct verb forms ("I became busier"). Add one specific supporting detail using a linking word to make the answer coherent (e.g., why you rode often or a memorable place).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I often rode it around my neighborhood. However, after I graduated from high school I became busier, so I stopped riding it and started using public transport, such as trains and buses, to get to school and work.

建議: Complete your final sentence to avoid trailing off; provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words (e.g., "however, because") to connect ideas. Add one specific example or statistic to support your point and vary vocabulary (e.g., "commute" instead of repeating "commuting").

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular, but it depends on the area. In cities many people commute by bike because there are dedicated bike lanes and cycling is often faster than driving. However, in the suburbs biking is less common because people usually have to travel longer distances and rely on cars for convenience.

× After I graduated from high school, I stopped lighting it because I become busier and started using uh, public transport, uh, for example, train and buses.

✓ After I graduated from high school, I stopped riding it because I became busier and started using public transport, for example trains and buses.

The sentence mixes past and present forms. 'Become' should be past tense 'became' to match 'graduated' and 'stopped'. Also 'lighting' is incorrect verb choice; context requires 'riding' (to ride a bike). 'Train and buses' should be parallel and pluralized as 'trains and buses' or 'the train and buses' depending on meaning. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for completed actions and use the correct verb 'ride' for bicycles.

× Yes, bikes are very popular, but it depends on the the areas.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular, but it depends on the area.

The phrase 'depends on the the areas' is incorrect: double 'the' is a typo and 'depends on the areas' is awkward. Use 'depends on the area' or 'depends on the area of the country' to indicate variation by region. Suggestion: remove the extra 'the' and use singular 'area' or rephrase as 'depends on the area' or 'depends on the region'.

× In cities many people use them for commuting because they're dedicated bike lanes and the cycling is often quicker than driving.

✓ In cities many people use them for commuting because there are dedicated bike lanes and cycling is often quicker than driving.

The clause 'they're dedicated bike lanes' is ungrammatical here; 'there are dedicated bike lanes' correctly introduces the existence of lanes. Also 'the cycling' is unnecessary; use 'cycling' as a general activity. Suggestion: use 'there are' to state existence and avoid the definite article before gerund when speaking generally.

× However, in the suburbs biking is less common because people usually.

✓ However, in the suburbs biking is less common because people usually drive.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks the verb or clause completing 'people usually.' Add the expected verb 'drive' to finish the thought. Suggestion: always ensure sentences have a subject and verb and complete the intended comparison or contrast.