自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại xe, tuổi khi có xe, kỷ niệm liên quan). Giữ tối đa 5 câu và dùng từ nối khi cần (for example, when I was ... , because ...).

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because the bike had training wheels at first, I felt confident learning to ride quickly.

建議: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi và có lỗi viết/nhận dạng từ (buys → bikes). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, nêu ý kiến rõ ràng và cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: dùng để đi học, giao thông tắc nghẽn, xu hướng thể thao). Sử dụng từ nối (because, for example, however) để làm rõ lập luận.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting to avoid traffic. For example, students often cycle to school, and there are also more bike lanes in cities now which encourages cycling.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. The original sentence as an answer is not grammatically wrong but is contextually incorrect; the corrected sentence uses past simple 'had' to answer a past-time question. Suggestion: use past simple for actions in the past (I had), and respond directly to yes/no questions with 'Yes' or 'No' plus a short statement. Example: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think buys are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student wrote 'buys' which is a misspelling and incorrect word choice instead of 'bikes'. This is a lexical error rather than a grammatical tense issue, but it affects meaning. Suggestion: check spelling and ensure noun matches the topic; 'bikes' is the plural noun referring to bicycles used with 'are popular'.