自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear, grammatical and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. Yes, I did.), then give 1–2 supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Fix grammar errors (use past tense, correct nouns) and avoid unclear words. For example, say why you rode the bike (commute, convenience) and where you went, and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I used my bike to ride to cram school after lessons because it was faster and cheaper than taking the bus. As a result, I went cycling almost every afternoon during junior high.

建議: Answer directly, then support with specific reasons and clear linking words. Use correct subject-verb agreement and smoother phrasing. Mention evidence (e.g. public transport usage, city layout) and contrast with exceptions. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in Japan. Although some people own bikes, most commuters prefer trains and buses because public transport is convenient and reliable in cities. In rural areas, however, cycling is more common for short trips.

× Yes I did. I use my bike to go to crime school after school because I have. Naray go to after school every day.

✓ Yes, I did. I used my bike to go to cram school after school because I had one. I used to go to cram school every day.

The student is describing past habitual actions, so past tense forms are required. 'use' should be 'used' and 'have' should be 'had'. 'Naray' appears to be a misspelling of 'cram' and the phrase 'go to after school' is ungrammatical; replace with 'used to go to cram school every day' to express habitual past action. Suggestion: use past simple or 'used to' for repeated past activities and proofread for word choice errors.

× I don't think so because some people has own bike but many people use train or bus to move so I don't think bike is a popular in my country Japan.

✓ I don't think so because some people have their own bikes, but many people use trains or buses to get around, so I don't think bikes are popular in my country, Japan.

Subject-verb agreement: 'some people' is plural and requires 'have' not 'has'. Also several related issues: 'own bike' should be 'their own bikes' (plural/plural possessive), 'train or bus' should be plural 'trains or buses' when speaking in general, and 'to move' is unnatural; 'to get around' is the correct collocation. Finally, 'bike is a popular' is incorrect article and number; 'bikes are popular' is correct. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs/nouns, use natural collocations (get around), and include commas for clarity.