自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct topic sentence then add 1–2 specific supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, how you used it, a memory). Use linking words to connect ideas. Keep it natural and within 3–4 short sentences.

範例: Yes, I did — my parents bought me a small red bike when I was seven. I rode it every afternoon around the neighborhood and learned to balance on it after a week. Because I rode it so often, it became my favorite way to visit friends and explore nearby parks.

建議: Start with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and examples (e.g., common uses, who rides them, infrastructure). Use a linking word like 'because' or 'for example' to make the answer coherent and a little longer (2–4 sentences).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students and office workers often cycle to save money and avoid traffic, and many cities have bike lanes which makes cycling safer.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past tense question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' A one-word response 'Yes.' is natural in conversation but does not explicitly match the tense or include the auxiliary verb. This is a sentence structure issue because the full response should include the auxiliary 'did' to mirror the past tense question. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I did.' or 'Yes, I had a bike.' to clearly answer in the past tense.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The examiner asked a present-tense question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' Replying with just 'Yes.' is minimal and omits a complete present-tense clause. This is classified as a present tense (sentence structure) issue because the answer should supply a present-tense opinion. Suggestion: give a full sentence using present tense, for example 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'Yes, they are quite popular.'