自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, avoid fillers and repetition, and use correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two brief specific reasons using linking words. For example, correct the tense and structure (use 'I was always afraid of getting injured') and remove hesitation sounds (uh, um).

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I couldn't learn to ride and I was always afraid of getting injured, so my parents didn't buy one for me.

建議: Answer directly, use clear reasons with correct grammar and linking words, and give specific supporting details or examples. Avoid vague words and incorrect collocations (e.g., 'prepare prefer to riding' is incorrect). Phrase reasons clearly: e.g., say people prefer cars or public transport, and explain why (comfort, status, safety).

範例: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country. Many people prefer cars or motorbikes because they are faster and more comfortable for long distances, and cycling is seen as less safe on busy roads.

× No, I didn't have any bike because I couldn't ride the bicycle and, and uh, umm, because, uh, I, I had always afraid from, uh, riding a bicycle and injuries.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because I couldn't ride a bicycle and I had always been afraid of riding a bicycle and getting injured.

Original sentence misused pronouns/articles and verb forms. 'Any bike' is unnatural; use 'a bike'. Use consistent noun phrase 'a bicycle' instead of mixing 'the bicycle'. 'Had always afraid from' is ungrammatical: correct form is 'had always been afraid of'. Also express injuries with a parallel gerund: 'getting injured'. Remove filler words and repeated words for clarity.

× No, it's not popular in my country because of several reason. One of the most important thing is that the most of the people in my country prepare prefer to riding and because they are so lazy.

✓ No, they are not popular in my country because of several reasons. One important reason is that most people here prefer riding motorcycles and are unwilling to ride bicycles because they are lazy.

Multiple structural and grammar errors: use plural 'reasons' with 'several'. 'It's' ambiguous; better 'they are' referring to bikes. 'One of the most important thing' should be 'One important reason'. 'The most of the people' should be 'most people'. 'Prefer to riding' is incorrect: use 'prefer riding' or 'prefer to ride'. Clarify subject 'they' and simplify phrase 'are so lazy' to 'are unwilling... because they are lazy'. Also ensure parallel verb forms and correct article usage.