自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Jawaban Anda tidak langsung menjawab pertanyaan dan terdengar bingung karena mengulang kata. Untuk meningkatkannya, jawab langsung dengan kalimat topik singkat yang menyatakan fakta (ya/tidak), lalu tambahkan 1–2 rincian spesifik (mis. siapa memberi sepeda, kapan, atau bagaimana Anda menggunakannya). Gunakan kata penghubung sederhana jika menambahkan detail seperti "and" atau "because". Jangan ulang pertanyaan; itu mengurangi kesan percaya diri.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I used it every weekend to ride to the park with my friends.

建議: Jawaban Anda tidak jelas dan ada ketidakpastian berulang. Berikan pendapat langsung dengan kalimat topik (e.g. "Not very popular"), lalu dukung dengan alasan spesifik (mis. preferensi transportasi, infrastruktur). Tutup dengan contoh atau perbandingan singkat. Hindari menyisipkan permintaan belajar bahasa dalam jawaban; itu tidak relevan dengan pertanyaan.

範例: Not very popular. Most people prefer motorbikes and cars because they are faster and more convenient, and there are few safe bike lanes in cities, so cycling is uncommon for daily commuting.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child? A child?

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question and then produced a fragment 'A child?' which is not a complete response. This is a sentence structure error: responses should be full sentences that directly answer the question. Suggestion: Begin with a clear subject and verb (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't'), then add supporting information ('I had a bike when I was a child'). Grammar problem type ID:26

× No, I don't know. I think I don't. I want improve my English.

✓ No, I don't know. I don't think so. I want to improve my English.

There are multiple tense and verb construction issues. 'I think I don't' is unnatural; in present tense negative responses use 'I don't think so.' Also 'I want improve my English' is missing the infinitive marker 'to' before the verb 'improve.' Suggestion: Use 'I don't think so' for negative beliefs in present tense and include 'to' with verbs after 'want' (want to improve). Grammar problem type ID:6