自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: The student misunderstood the examiner’s question and replied with a question about a different object. For Part 1 you must answer the examiner directly and naturally. Give a clear topic sentence (yes/no or short phrase), then one or two specific supporting details. Keep responses concise (no more than 5 sentences) and use linking words if adding details.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I used to ride to my friend’s house every weekend. Because my house was near a park, I spent a lot of time practicing there, and by age ten I could ride confidently without training wheels.

建議: The answer is unclear and contains inaccurate vocabulary (“tank bikes”) and a phrasing that sounds like a question back to the examiner. For a higher score, state your opinion directly, use correct and relevant vocabulary, and support it with a specific reason or example using a linking word (for example, because, so, therefore). Keep it natural and concise.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in big cities you often see dedicated bike lanes and many commuters prefer cycling to avoid traffic.

× 'Did you have a bag when you were a child?'

✓ 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

'The student repeated the examiner's question but changed the noun, producing a sentence that does not answer the question asked. This is a sentence structure/use-of-response error rather than a tense or agreement issue. The correction provides a direct, grammatically correct answer in the past simple to match the examiner's question. Suggestion: answer questions directly using the expected tense (past simple for 'Did you...') and include the correct noun (bike) instead of repeating or substituting unrelated words.'

× 'The tank bikes are popular in your country.'

✓ 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country.'

'The student produced an odd and ungrammatical response: "The tank bikes are popular in your country." This has multiple issues: wrong perspective (saying "your country" to the examiner), an unclear noun phrase "tank bikes," and an incorrect article/use of demonstrative. The corrected sentence gives a clear, simple present answer about general popularity using the simple present tense. Suggestion: use simple present for general facts, refer to the correct country perspective (my country), and avoid unnecessary determiners or unclear modifiers.'