自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike. Avoid repetition and incorrect words. Use 2–4 supporting details (e.g., who taught you, when you learned, how often you rode) linked with connecting words like “but”, “however”, or “and”. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and correct verb forms (had/was able to).

範例: No, I didn't have my own bike as a child, but I could ride other people’s bicycles. For example, my older cousin taught me when I was eight, and I often rode around the neighborhood on weekends. However, I never learned to ride a motorbike.

建議: Answer directly and use clearer vocabulary. Begin with a topic sentence stating your opinion, then support it with specific reasons and examples using linking words such as “because”, “for example”, or “also”. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like “motorist thing” and provide one or two concrete comparisons (e.g., bike vs car use, who uses bikes).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and delivery workers use bicycles in cities, while families often own cars for longer journeys. Also, you can see many bikes parked outside markets and schools.

× Actually I don't have a bike, I don't know how to drive bike, but I know I know bicycle, how to ride a bicycle and I know how to ride others mortal thing but.

✓ Actually I didn't have a bike. I didn't know how to ride a bike, but I knew how to ride a bicycle and I knew how to ride other motor vehicles.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so verbs should be in the past tense. Use 'didn't have' and 'didn't know' for negatives in simple past. Use 'ride a bike' or 'ride a bicycle' (not 'drive bike'). 'Know' in the past becomes 'knew'. 'Others mortal thing' is incorrect vocabulary and word order; 'other motor vehicles' is a clearer phrase. Suggestion: identify the time frame in the question and consistently use past-tense forms (did/didn't, knew) and correct collocations (ride a bike, motor vehicle).

× Guess in my country bike is a most popular motorist thing and also and also like a like a bike.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country and many people like them.

The original uses 'Guess' and present-tense mismatches. Use 'I think' for opinion. Plural 'bikes are' is required. 'a most popular motorist thing' is ungrammatical; use 'very popular' or 'one of the most popular'. Avoid repetition 'and also and also like a like a bike'. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb agreement and natural collocations: 'bikes are popular' and 'people like them'.

× My friends, my neighbors, my another another things.

✓ My friends and my neighbors do.

The phrase 'my another another things' is ungrammatical and uses incorrect pronoun/determiner forms. Use 'another' only with singular nouns (e.g., 'another friend') or use 'other' for plural: 'other things' or 'other people'. Here the speaker likely means 'my friends and neighbors', so simplify to that. Suggestion: use 'other' for plurals and avoid repeating words.

× They have already bike and cars but I don't have a bike.

✓ They already have bikes and cars, but I don't have a bike.

Word order and article use: 'have already bike and cars' is incorrect; use 'already have bikes and cars'. Plural 'bikes' matches 'they'. Keep 'a bike' for the singular when referring to the speaker. Suggestion: place 'already' before the main verb and ensure nouns match singular/plural appropriately.