自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and natural: give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler sounds (“mmm”) and greetings that interrupt the flow. Use linking words if you expand (for example, “and”, “so”, “because”). Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents gave me when I was seven, and I rode it to school most days. Because it was lightweight and had training wheels at first, I learned to balance quickly and felt very confident riding around the neighbourhood.

建議: Answer directly and then support your opinion with specific reasons or examples. Avoid hesitations like “mmm” and vague words like “maybe.” Use linking words such as “because”, “for example” or “also” to make your response coherent. Aim for 2–4 sentences with relevant vocabulary (e.g., commuting, cycling lanes, health, environment).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have more cycling lanes now, and students often ride bikes to university to avoid traffic and save money.

× Hello. MMM, yes, maybe.

✓ Hello. Um, yes, maybe.

The original contains 'MMM' which is not a proper verbal hesitation in written form; this is a sentence structure / filler issue. Replace 'MMM' with the common hesitation 'Um' to reflect spoken pause more naturally. Also keep punctuation simple: 'Hello.' then 'Um, yes, maybe.' Suggestion: use 'Um' or 'Well' as spoken fillers and avoid repeated letters in formal transcripts.

× MMM, maybe. Yes.

✓ Um, maybe. Yes.

As above, 'MMM' is an inappropriate written representation of a hesitation. Use 'Um' to indicate a pause or uncertainty. The two fragments 'Um, maybe.' and 'Yes.' are acceptable as short spoken responses. Suggestion: transcribe hesitations with 'Um' or 'Well' and keep each utterance clear.