自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly in past tense, be concise and natural, avoid unnecessary apologies or vague phrases. Provide one or two supporting details (reason and brief consequence) using linking words. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school or joined friends when they rode past.

建議: Start with a clear opinion about popularity, use correct grammar and linking words, and give specific supporting information (who uses bikes and why). Avoid unclear pronouns and tense errors.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many students and commuters use bicycles for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and I often saw my childhood friends riding theirs around the neighborhood.

× No, I haven't because we are somehow like poor so we cannot afford a bike.

✓ No, I didn't because we were kind of poor so we couldn't afford a bike.

The student used 'haven't' (present perfect) incorrectly for a past situation; the question asked about childhood (past), so past simple 'didn't' is appropriate. Also 'are' should be past 'were' to match childhood timeframe. 'Somehow like' is informal and awkward; replace with 'kind of' or 'somewhat'. Use the contracted past 'couldn't' for ability in the past. Suggestion: use consistent past tense when referring to childhood events (e.g., 'I didn't because we were kind of poor, so we couldn't afford a bike').

× I believe yours, most of my childhood friend have a bike while I was just watching them.

✓ I believe so; most of my childhood friends had a bike while I just watched them.

There are several issues: 'yours' is incorrect word choice; 'so' or 'they did' fits better. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' ('most of my childhood friends'). The verb tense should be past ('had' not 'have') to match 'childhood' and 'was watching'. Also 'I was just watching them' is acceptable but 'I just watched them' is simpler. Suggestion: use correct pronoun/word ('so'), pluralize the noun, and use past tense verbs for past contexts.