自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, use past tense and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details (where/why/how often) using linking words. Keep it within 1–3 sentences and correct verb forms.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to my friend’s house and to the park, so it was an important part of my childhood.

建議: Use clearer sentence structure and correct grammar. Begin with a direct statement, then give specific reasons or examples with linking words (because, for example, so). Avoid vague phrases and incorrect word order; use plural nouns correctly.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many children and adults use them for short trips. For example, in my neighborhood, lots of families ride bikes to the market on weekends.

× Yes, I have a, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about having a bike when you were a child (past time frame). The student used the present tense 'have' which is inconsistent with the past context. Use past tense 'had' to match the time reference. Suggestion: pay attention to time markers like 'when you were a child' and change present verbs to past (have -> had).

× I think bikes are popular in my country because they are a lot of children that bikes.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because a lot of children have bikes.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word order: 'they are a lot of children that bikes' is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is that many children own bikes. Use the quantifier phrase 'a lot of children' followed by the verb 'have' to indicate possession. Also replace the unnecessary pronoun 'they' and the incorrect relative clause. Suggestion: form the clause as 'because a lot of children have bikes' or 'because many children have bikes.'