自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Keep your answer direct and correct grammar, avoid irrelevant or confusing words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., "present" → "present" is fine but use "gift"; "couldn't write it" is incorrect — likely meant "couldn't ride it").

範例: Yes, I had a bike as a child. My parents gave it to me as a gift for my tenth birthday, and I used it to ride around the neighborhood every afternoon. However, as I grew taller, the bike became too small for me, so I stopped using it.

建議: Answer directly, then provide a specific reason with correct grammar and linking words. Use plural agreement and more precise vocabulary (e.g., "motorbikes" not "motorbike"). You can contrast with a brief example or consequence to enrich the response within 1–2 supporting sentences.

範例: Not really. Most people in my country prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for commuting in busy cities. For example, many commuters use motorbikes to travel to work quickly and avoid crowded buses.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The use of 'did have' is unnecessary for simple past affirmative sentences. In English, the simple past is formed with the past form of the verb without 'did' for affirmative statements. Use 'I had' instead of 'I did have' for natural, correct phrasing. Suggestion: Use the simple past form 'had' for affirmative past statements (I had, she went, they played).

× It was my parents present on my 10th birthday.

✓ It was my parents' present on my 10th birthday.

The sentence needs the possessive form 'parents'' to show that the present belonged to the parents. Additionally, the apostrophe indicates possession. Suggestion: Use 'parents'' for something belonging to both parents (my parents' car, my parents' house).

× But now I couldn't write it because it was too small for me to.

✓ But now I couldn't use it because it was too small for me.

'Couldn't write it' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is inability to use the bike. Also the trailing 'to' is unnecessary and ungrammatical. Replace 'write' with the appropriate verb 'use' and remove the extra 'to'. Suggestion: Choose verbs that match the intended action (use, ride) and avoid incomplete infinitive forms like 'to' without a verb.

× No, I don't think so.

✓ No, I don't think so.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no change. It uses the auxiliary 'do' properly with the base verb 'think' for the present simple negative.

× Many people in my country is riding a motorbike instead of bike because it is more convenient and faster than bike.

✓ Many people in my country ride motorbikes instead of bikes because they are more convenient and faster.

There are several issues: 'is riding' does not agree with plural subject 'many people' — use base verb 'ride'. 'Motorbike' and 'bike' should be plural to match 'many people' and to generalize the objects. Also use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' for agreement. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement for plural subjects (they ride), pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally (motorbikes, bikes), and match pronouns and verbs in number.