自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is correct but too short and lacks development. Provide a brief topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details (reason, context or memory) using a linking word to make it coherent. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I lived in a small apartment without much space, so my parents thought it wasn’t practical. However, I sometimes borrowed bikes from neighbors to ride in the park on weekends.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains a wording error (“Bike biking”) and is slightly repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason or example using a linking word (for example, because, since, or moreover). Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., cycling, commuters, recreational).

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting as well as leisure. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes, and families often cycle together on weekends, which makes cycling common across all age groups.

× Bike biking is one of the activities that people of all ages like to do.

✓ Cycling is one of the activities that people of all ages like to do.

The phrase 'Bike biking' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use the gerund/noun form 'cycling' or the compound noun 'bike riding' instead. 'Cycling' succinctly expresses the activity. Also this preserves correct noun usage after the cleft 'one of the activities that...'. Suggestion: replace 'Bike biking' with 'Cycling' or 'bike riding'.