自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly and stay on topic. Begin with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and within 3–4 short sentences. Also avoid misunderstanding the meaning of the question.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a gift from my parents when I was seven, and I used it to ride to school and visit friends. Because the roads were quiet in my neighborhood, I learned to ride quickly and felt very independent.

建議: Give a direct opinion, then add specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Use correct grammar for plurality and collocations (e.g., 'more bikers' or 'bicycles are popular'). Keep sentences short and clear.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and there are also more bike lanes in cities nowadays. As a result, cycling is a common way to travel for students and workers.

× Did you have a boyfriend? You were a child.

✓ Did you have a boyfriend when you were a child?

The student split a single question into two sentences and used a pronoun reference awkwardly. The original repeats the subject 'you' causing a fragmented sentence. Combine into one question using 'when you were a child' to clearly link the two ideas and maintain proper clause structure. Use a single auxiliary 'did' for the past tense question.

× Yes we have more biker in popular in my country.

✓ Yes, we have more bikers who are popular in my country.

Several issues here fit the subject-verb agreement/number and word order categories. 'Biker' should be plural 'bikers' to agree with 'more'. The phrase 'in popular' is incorrect; use a relative clause 'who are popular' or rephrase as 'bikes are popular'. Also missing comma after 'Yes'. A clearer alternative: 'Yes, biking is very popular in my country' or 'Yes, we have many popular bikers in my country.' These options fix number agreement and correct word order.