自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammatical errors, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific details. Use linking words if you add details. For example, correct tense and remove duplicated words, and replace unclear terms like “A2UH” with a clear description (e.g., “wide” or a size).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was quite big with wide wheels, which made it stable and easy to ride on rough roads. I used it to travel to my friend’s house and to the park every weekend.

建議: Answer directly and use fluent, natural phrasing. Begin with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons and a short example. Remove repetition and use appropriate linking words (for example, “because” or “therefore”).

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For instance, many people use bicycles to commute to work or school, especially in crowded city areas where cars are slower.

× Yes I had AI had a bike when I was a child and it was big with A2UH wheels.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and it was big with A2UH wheels.

The student repeated 'had' ('AI had') which is likely a transcription error; remove the extra word. Also add a comma after 'Yes' and between clauses for clarity. The sentence correctly uses past tense 'had' and 'was' to describe a past situation, so no tense change is needed. Suggestion: speak each clause clearly and avoid repeating words when describing past possessions. Grammar problem type's ID: 5

× Yes, it is also popular in our country because it can you can use that tool transport to another places from another place.

✓ Yes, they are also popular in our country because you can use them to travel from one place to another.

Multiple issues fit the allowed list: subject-verb agreement (bikes -> plural require 'they are' rather than 'it is'), incorrect pronoun and article use ('that tool transport' is ungrammatical), and sentence structure problems. The corrected sentence uses the plural subject 'they' with the correct verb 'are', replaces awkward phrasing with 'you can use them to travel', and uses 'from one place to another' for clear movement expression. Suggestion: identify the subject (bikes) and ensure verbs and pronouns agree in number; use simple verbs like 'travel' and common prepositional phrase 'from one place to another.' Grammar problem type's ID: 27