自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答把問題重複成了另一個疑問句，沒有直接回答。改進時要先給出明確的主題句（是或不是），然後用一到兩句具體細節支持回答，避免把問題原封不動地復述。可以使用簡單時態（過去式）和連接詞來增加流暢性。

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it to the park every weekend. Although I fell a few times at first, I learned to balance within a month.

建議: 你的回應再次只是重複改寫考官的話，並且用詞不準確（proper 不適合此處）。改進時應直接表達觀點（例如：是/否/部分地），並用具體原因或例子支持，如交通、環保或習慣方面的觀察。使用連接詞（because, however, for example）使答案更連貫。

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short trips because they are cheap and convenient, and some cities have bike-sharing programs that make cycling easier.

× Do you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

问题类型ID: 6（现在时问题）。原句使用现在时“Do you have”但问句的时间状语是“when you were a child”，表示过去。时态不一致。应使用过去时助动词“Did”并将动词用原形“have”。建议：遇到明确的过去时间（如 when you were a child, last year, in 2010 等）时，将整个句子改为过去时，例如用 Did + 主语 + 动词原形。

× Do you think bikes are proper in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

问题类型ID: 13（形容词或副词使用不正确）。原句用词“proper”不符合语境。题目询问“自行车在你国家是否受欢迎”，应使用形容词“popular”（受欢迎的）。“proper”意为“合适的、恰当的”，不表达受欢迎程度。建议：根据语境选择恰当词汇；表示流行或受欢迎用 popular/ common/ widely used 等。