自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장이 시제와 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미가 불분명합니다. 질문에 바로 대답한 뒤 과거 시제를 사용해 간단한 주제문을 말하고, 이어서 구체적 세부사항(언제, 어떤 자전거였는지, 누구와 탔는지, 자전거에 대한 기억)을 1~2문장으로 덧붙이세요. 연결어(for example, when, because 등)를 사용해 문장 흐름을 자연스럽게 만드세요.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that I got when I was six. For example, I used to ride it every afternoon with my older sister around our neighborhood.

建議: 문장이 어색하고 의미가 불분명합니다. 먼저 직접적으로 의견을 제시한 뒤 이유나 근거를 구체적으로 제시하세요(예: 자전거 이용이 많은 지역, 통근이나 레저용 사용, 자전거 도로 등). 연결어(For instance, because, also)를 사용해 논리적으로 확장하세요.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For instance, many people use bikes for short commutes and exercise, and cities have dedicated bike lanes that make cycling convenient and safe.

× Yes, I have a bike when I tried.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Original uses present tense 'have' but the question asks about the past. Use the past tense 'had'. Also 'when I tried' is unclear and incorrect; replace with 'when I was a child' to match the examiner's question about childhood. Suggestion: use past simple for states in the past and a clear time expression (e.g., 'when I was a child').

× Yes, my country's people ride the bike or wave.

✓ Yes, people in my country often ride bicycles or motorcycles.

Original phrase 'my country's people' is unnatural; use 'people in my country'. 'Ride the bike' is incorrect article usage and specific; use plural 'bicycles' or 'motorcycles'. 'Or wave' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'or wave' is wrong — maybe 'or wave' meant 'or drive' or 'or walk'. I assumed 'motorcycles' as a common alternative. Suggestion: use natural collocation 'people in my country' and plural nouns for general statements, and choose the correct verb for the activity (ride/drive).