自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly using correct tense and natural phrasing. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Use past tense for childhood and avoid unnecessary words. Also correct grammar: "I didn't have" not "I don't have".

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I lived in a busy city where my parents preferred to drive me to school, so I rarely had the chance to ride one.

建議: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then add a specific reason and one example. Use linking words (because, therefore) and correct grammar (e.g. "exposes you to heat", "people rarely use bikes"). Keep it concise and natural. Replace vague phrases like "my country" with "people" or "many people".

範例: Not really. Because our climate is very hot for much of the year, many people avoid cycling and prefer to drive cars instead. For example, during summer temperatures often exceed 35°C, which makes cycling uncomfortable.

× Unfortunately I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Unfortunately I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with a past time marker 'when I was a child'. This is a tense inconsistency. Use the past tense 'didn't have' to match 'was a child'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently for past time references (e.g., 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× No because my country has really hot weather so riding bikes expose you from heat and that is why my country rarely use bikes and often use a car.

✓ No, because my country has really hot weather, riding bikes exposes you to the heat, and that is why people in my country rarely use bikes and often use cars.

There are several agreement and usage errors: 'riding bikes expose' should be 'riding bikes exposes' to agree with the gerund subject 'riding bikes'. 'Expose you from heat' is incorrect preposition and structure; use 'exposes you to the heat'. 'My country rarely use bikes' uses incorrect subject for the verb; 'my country' is a singular noun but the intended agent is people, so use 'people in my country rarely use bikes'. Also 'often use a car' should be plural 'use cars' for general statement. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree, use correct prepositions ('to' not 'from'), and use plural nouns when speaking generally (cars) or refer to people when describing habits. Grammar problem type ID:27