自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more natural, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and article errors and avoid redundancy. For example, replace "it's feels over the moon" with a clear expression of emotion and fix plural/singular mistakes.

範例: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I felt thrilled to ride it around my neighborhood. I especially remember practicing balance on quiet streets, which made me very confident on two wheels.

建議: Answer directly, give one clear reason and add a specific example or contrast using linking words. Correct grammar (singular/plural, verb agreement) and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "less popular", "due to"). Avoid vague phrases like "changing in technology."

範例: Not really. Bicycles are less popular in my country because many people prefer cars and reliable public transport due to urbanisation. For example, in big cities most commuters use buses or cars since cycling lanes are limited and distances are long.

× My father bought it for me and it's feels over the moon while riding it in my neighborhood.

✓ My father bought it for me and I felt over the moon while riding it in my neighborhood.

The sentence mixes structures: 'it's feels' is ungrammatical. The student intended to describe a past emotion ('felt') because the context is 'when I was a child.' Use the past simple 'I felt' to match 'bought' and 'was'. Also 'it's' (it is) + verb is incorrect here; replace with the subject 'I' and past verb 'felt' to indicate past feeling. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for events and feelings in the past, e.g., 'I felt over the moon.'

× It was such a remarkable days.

✓ It was such a remarkable day.

The noun 'days' is plural but the determiner and adjective phrase 'such a remarkable' require a singular noun (a + singular noun). Because the speaker refers to a particular time or day, use the singular 'day.' If multiple days were meant, remove 'a' and say 'It was such remarkable days' (but that is awkward); better: 'They were such remarkable days.' Suggestion: Match determiners (a/an) with singular nouns or change the determiner if you mean plural.

× I don't think bikes are popular in my country because of the changing in technology.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because of changes in technology.

'The changing in technology' is awkward and mixes article use with an uncountable/abstract noun. Use the plural noun 'changes' to refer to ongoing technological developments, and omit the unnecessary definite article 'the.' This keeps the present-tense opinion 'I don't think' while correcting the noun phrase. Suggestion: Use 'changes in technology' or 'technological changes' to express this idea.

× Many peoples prefers cars and public transport instead of bicycles.

✓ Many people prefer cars and public transport instead of bicycles.

'Peoples' is incorrect here; the plural of 'person' is 'people.' Also, 'many people' is plural, so the verb should be 'prefer' (not 'prefers'). This is a subject-verb agreement and singular/plural noun issue; select 'people' and plural verb form to match. Suggestion: Use 'many people prefer' for correct plural noun and verb agreement.