自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng nhưng cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh thì sai hoặc lặp từ. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán (had, rode), sửa một số từ không chính xác (drive → ride) và gộp câu để ngắn gọn (tối đa 3–4 câu). Bạn cũng có thể thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (màu sắc hoặc cảm xúc) để câu giàu nội dung hơn.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was five my parents bought me a bright red bike and taught me how to ride it. I remember feeling very proud the first time I cycled without training wheels.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng gặp lỗi ngữ pháp, sắp xếp từ và phát âm ý không rõ. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu khẳng định ngắn, sau đó nêu lí do với liên từ (because, so) và cung cấp các ví dụ cụ thể, tránh lặp từ. Dùng cấu trúc câu đúng (e.g. "Many people, including students and workers, use bicycles...").

範例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. Many people, including students and office workers, ride bikes to school or work, and others use them for short trips to the market or for morning exercise.

× Yes, I did. I have a bike. When I was five years old, my parents bought me a very nice bicycle and they taught me how to drive a bike.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike. When I was five years old, my parents bought me a very nice bicycle and they taught me how to ride it.

The student mixes past simple and present simple incorrectly. 'I have a bike' should be 'I had a bike' to match the past context set by 'Did you have...' and 'When I was five.' Also 'drive a bike' is non-native: use 'ride a bike' or 'ride it.' Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past events and use 'ride' for bicycles.

× So I do think that the bikes are commonly used in my country.

✓ I do think that bicycles are commonly used in my country.

Awkward phrasing and article use: 'the bikes' is unnatural when speaking generally; use 'bicycles' or 'bikes' without 'the.' Also 'So' at the start is unnecessary. Suggestion: use simple, direct statements for general facts.

× Children out in student worker employees is everyone use bicycle.

✓ Children, students, workers and employees all use bicycles.

This sentence is ungrammatical and lists groups without correct structure. 'is everyone use bicycle' violates subject-verb agreement and word order. Correction lists the groups clearly and uses plural 'bicycles' with verb agreement 'all use.' Suggestion: separate groups with commas and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× They use bicycle to go to work, to go to the market or to do the exercise every morning, every.

✓ They use bicycles to go to work, to go to the market, or to exercise every morning.

Use plural 'bicycles' for generalization. 'Do the exercise' is unnatural; use 'exercise.' The trailing 'every' is incomplete. Also add commas for list clarity. Suggestion: use 'to exercise' and finish adverbial expressions like 'every morning.'